ETERNAL GUARDIAN
Angels wing extended,
Creating a protective shield,
Guardian for a purpose,
That reaches beyond the present,
A good deed never dies,
Even after all that knew,
Of the deed have passed,
From remembrance,
It remains,
Blending with the cosmos,
Inspiring to new birth,
New creation,
Love,
Honor,
Productive positive growth,
That will dwell among all life,
All a product of one caring touch,
A cherub who opened an eye,
Unfurled his velvety wings,
And reached out his hand
Comments
Just so beautifully expressed. Well done and voted up
It is beautiful, uplifting. Thank you!
So beautiful Dad, voted up and sharing.
Wayne, You've written a very moving account of some profound moment. I enjoyed this beautiful piece of writing.
nice work, i really liked this poem. keep it up man.
I. White
I love this. Beautiful and insightful...the cycle of life... Voted up
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Joanne:
Nellieanna:
Erika:
Chris:
Isaac:
Beth:
Thank you all very much. May a good deed find its way to you today, and may you also bestow the same upon another... : )
This is a pleasant presentation. The cosmos is better for it.
YOUR VERY WELCOME, KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK
You poem has a warm feeling, and that is hard to capture. Well done Wayne. Will vote up.
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Thank you, Tom!
Beautiful write!!! I think you and I are on the same wave length right now!
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Thank you, Audrey. By the way, I was wondering where in CA you are from since I am a CA native myself?
I am in the bay area--and you?
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I have lived in San Diego and Long Beach, but I was born in Bakersfield and lived most of my life in the San Joaquin Valley. Florida is my home now : )
The Bay area is very nice. I loved Northern California.
So what are you doing in Florida?
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I've lived here for 12 years now. I just really wanted to get out of Bakersfield. An opportunity presented itself and I jumped on it.
beautiful... love the spirituality :)
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Thank you, Eric
This is beautiful, Wayne and a great message to Mankind!
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Thank you, Bravewarrior!
Well Sir Wayne, not only are you a poetic chameleon in which you can write any style or in any genre but you are the eternal guardian of great storytelling with your magic words.
Sending warm wishes from Colin's jazz cafe and a nice cuppa tea, don't worry , red wine will come later with Black Sabbath , lol.
lake erie time 8:19pm
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Colin: Thank you my friend. I do enjoy mixing up my styles, (as I have see you do). I do the same thing with painting. I've been told that I should find a particular niche' and stick with it, but I hate the idea of being stereotyped into one particular expectation. When it comes to my painting, my writing, or my music, I don't worry so much what other people might think of it. I do hope that others will enjoy it, but as long as it is tickling my fancy...I'll giggle by myself if I have to!
Very nice, lovely poem, Wayne. Beautiful message.
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Phyllis, thanks again for your wonderful compliments.
Congratulations my worthy and esteemed colleague and friend on your forthcoming new book.
Colin aka epi-man
Wednesday June 6
1:29pm lake erie time
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Ah, thank you Colin. It is my first endeavor in publishing, so I am very excited. thank you for your encouragement since I have been here. It has helped me tremendously.
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