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Echo of Perfection

Updated on October 6, 2012
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The sweet trail

That lingers behind


Visible to the blind

In every word

In every touch




The caress so light

Leaving tingles

Up the spine


With delight

At the utter thought

There is nothing else

To me

This is where

I will stay

A magnetic force

A glimmer

Decadent sway

Sparkle to the eye

Something unrecognizable

Making the heart skip a beat

Leaving it on display

Goes so far deep

All I can say

This is perfection

Under lock and key



To hold

To keep


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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi XStatic thank you so much! :)

      Hi Ruby thank you so much! :)

      Hi Frank thank you so much! :)

      Hi Debbie thank you so much! :)

      Hi Leslie thank you so much! :)

      Hi Audrey thank you so much! :)

      Hi Gypsy thank you so much! :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. So romantic. Great pic. Passing this on.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Sexy write--but so well done--lovely job!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Mmmmmmmm...soooooo s e x y! Me gusta Caroline! sharing and tweeting!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow Caroline.. my heart is skipping a beat after reading this.. simply beautiful... I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!



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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      what a wonderfully written piece and as X-man stated in his comment i too loved that Decadent sway.. voted awesome

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful Caroline. I love the picture..Perfect..

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      That kind of perfection is a wonderful thing to find and hold on to alright! Loved that "decadent sway."