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Eclipse

Updated on January 19, 2015

A chilly wind outside whipping up trees in whitecaps

A beggar shivers with cold under dull light of a streetlamp

No Deprimo , no boots

Bullets ,instead, in a black chest.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      amazing..loved it and happy new year

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      Linda Rogers 2 years ago from Minnesota

      You did a great job setting the tone of this poem. I can feel the darkness in this moment. Well written James :)

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Well done James! Brought tears!

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      CrisSp 2 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Dark but the message is clear.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Very clear and important--

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 2 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      You packed a hell of a punch with just a few well chosen words. Emotive and powerful.

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      Tijani Achamlal 23 months ago from Morocco

      Frank,

      Thanks for the comment.

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      Tijani Achamlal 23 months ago from Morocco

      Minnetonka Twin,

      Thanks so much for the comment.We are living once again dark ages.No slit in the horizon.

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