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Eight years filled an ocean

Updated on August 2, 2012

Eight years filled an ocean

It was two days from our first kiss
I could not move from the bed
Staring at the ceiling
Sure that soon I would be dead

But for three whole days
And three whole nights
You kept me in this world
As I swore to myself secretly
If I survive this she's my girl

I took just two months
Fourteen thousand miles
Before I was at your home
Knelt beside you
Next to seven monks
Selling my soul, heart and bones

It took just eight years
And an ocean
Of the the tears that I have cried

So I beg
Please give me back eight years
For in that bed I should of died


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      Aneisha 2 years ago

      I've been lonikog for a post like this forever (and a day)

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      Banjo 2 years ago

      Frankly I think that's ablteuolsy good stuff.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK


      thank you so much, I don't really want you to cry but all my work is true narration of my life and some of it is a lot more painful than this piece, please read they are never long pieces and are true as the sky.


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      Motherbynature 5 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

      Ah you made my eyes all watery! Stop it!

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      Matthew Weese 5 years ago from Auburn

      I liked it.