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Eight years have carried you

Updated on September 24, 2012







Yearning for a strange land
Out of reach for far too long
Using all of your will
Rescuing your dreams
Never losing your hope
Everything else all around you falling at the seems
Waiting patiently for your time
At last your dreams come true
Going where your hard work and.......
Eight years have carried you

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      The love for Savannah that pours forth from your heart onto the page is comforting. I hope you're keeping a journal of these thoughts for her!

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Shauna, this is part of my reason for hubpages , so she can no how I felt and on what dates in her life too, but I have a confession this is for someone else, but it fits Savannah's story so well I think my love and her influence spills out again :)

      But I also want to say that this person has had so many parallel experiences that any of my poems could be for either person.

      So with your help ( Thanks ;) I dedicate it to the pair of them.

      How are you anyway ??

      Simba

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Shauna I have been looking at the piece again and Wow you are right about so much of it, I don't really vet my stuff to much. I is an Acrostic piece I confess but, when you look at Savannah age, plight, and my devotion to her it would hold up in COURT !!! things are moving in funny ways at the moment as well TBH

      Simba x

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I'm doing well, Simba. I quit my job last week in favor of branching out as a full time freelance writer. Whew! Big step!

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      OMG !!!

      Hows it going then ??? so happy and don't want to sound like an idiot but proud of you too :)

      If anyone can do it Shauna it's you wooooooooooowwwww!!!

      I'm a bit.......don't know what to say but go go go !!!! sooo cool !!!!

      How can I PM you ??

      Simba x

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful Your love for your daughter just shines through.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thank you gypsy Rose Lee,

      You always make the writing worth while ;)

      Simba

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      It's going slow, Simba. I'm busy every day but it'll take a while to make what I was making at the construction company.

      It's a little scary, but something I have to do.

      Go to my profile page, there should be "contact bravewarrior". That'll send you to my personal email address. Thanx for your support!

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      This is a very thoughtful gesture for someone who may have gone through her own fate and pains in life. Beautiful one.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thanks Coffee you comments have been a super start to my day really they have, and I am unsure if you or anybody have noticed but this piece is also Acrostic , in fact a few of mine are but I keep it quite hahaha!!!

      Not any more you wonderful comments have shaken a secret out of me lol I won't not go checking them all it's only a few with this twist !!!

      Simba xxx

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      Marites Mabugat-Simbajon 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

      Cool and I see it! I have to look for what an acrostic poetry is about. Geez, I've learned this before but I've forgotten. Honestly, with my poems, I don't label most of them to what type of poetry it is. There are several choices (I still have to learn the rules) but I have to pick the right one, and before doing so, I have to search what they are, ahahaha. Too lazy, so I skip that part for now.

      This time, I won't forget what acrostic poem is. I might be watching it on your poems. Thanks for the tip, Simba!

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