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Elixir of being – a poem

Updated on March 4, 2013
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That intense stare

And yet again I am floating,

In the elixir of symphony

To fly high in an azure sea……

Sea of thou love

The azure elixir to be mesmerized

Above the sense of being.


That promising touch

Then again I am flying,

In the elixir of glory unexplored

To sink deep in the cloud nine….

Sky of thou passion

The hyped elixir to be hypnotized

Above the sense of being.


That heavenly kiss

And again I am flowing,

In the elixir of fire passionate

To glow bright like the Koh-I-Noor

Diamond is thou kiss

Koh-I-Noor of elixir to be sparked

Above the sense of being.


That warm embrace

Then again I am gliding,

In the elixir of earthy impression

To excel afterglow in terracotta delight

Earthy inferno is thou hug

Terracotta of elixir to be chiseled

Above the sense of being.


That supreme elation

And yet again I am dying,

In the elixir of Aether sensation

To dive in the quintessence of desire

Ethereal crystal of thou ecstasy

Desire of elixir to be cocooned

Above the sense of being.


Thou is my love

My life till nothing,

Elixir of being

Above everything.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Very correct you are here @Vinaya Ghimire.....your visit and words are very much appreciated. Thank you . God bless

      deergha

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      If life and living was not interesting why would Gods take avatars?

      Being-in-the-world is elixir.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      You are welcome and its my pleasure indeed.

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Thanks deergha for following me, i am honored.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @girishpuri for your kind words here. I am much honored. God bless you too

      deergha

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Desire of elixir to be cocooned,

      above the sense of being...

      deergha heads off... what an imagination, friend...simply great.. God bless you and yours

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Leslie.....LOL....you are most welcome but to drink with me the "elixir of being" ( or whatever it is !!!!!) you have to make quite a journey my dear friend :-) But i will be very happy to be honest to have your company. Thank you always for your visit and comment here. Take care and God bless you always

      deergha

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      Eddy.....many thanks to you for you made your time to read it. Your votes and shares are all very much appreciated also. Hope you too enjoy your day ahead. Take care and God bless you

      deergha

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      That supreme elation

      And yet again I am dying,

      In the elixir of Aether sensation

      To dive in the quintessence of desire

      Ethereal crystal of thou ecstasy

      Desire of elixir to be cocooned

      Above the sense of being

      Wow wonderful words and I vote up and share. Thank you so much for sharing this gem;enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      i'll have whatever you're drinking! Lol..

      take me with you on this magical fantasy ride, please...

      beautifully woven, my friend..

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@James-wolve ...sure this all is a journey to the end whatever it is ! I am very glad that you have loved this poem of mine. God bless you

      deergha

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      Many thanks @torrilynn ... for your kind visit and comment here. Your votes are also appreciated very much. God bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you@manatita44 .....for your kind visit and comment here. You are very much right here. My schooling background is not English. I have done my schooling in Assamese medium background. But for my interest i just try to write though it may not be up to the mark. But i try to put down my thoughts and express it in some way purely for my interest. Thank you again. God bless you

      deergha

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      Many thanks @SiberianWolf........thanks that you could relate to my endeavor here. Your comment is very much appreciated sure. god bless you

      deergha

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      Thank you @Ratihegde for you stopped here and made your time to comment also. I am happy the way you could relate the crux of it. God bless you

      deergha

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      Mhatter.......many thanks for going through this . Your comment is very much appreciated.

      god bless you always

      deergha

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      Many thanks@unknown spy ........its so nice to see you here........I am so happy that you are finding my writing beautiful. Take care and God bless you always

      deergha

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi deergha.. your writings are super beautiful.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this. Nicely put together.

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      Rati Hegde 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      wow .. . transcending all the five elements of wind, earth, fire, water and space with love and passion. beautiful :)

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      Eric T. Shortridge 5 years ago from MidWest

      reminds me of a powerful love potion :) I'll have a drink of that elixir please - felt like I was soaring with the birds, above the clouds... Nice ink!

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      manatita44 5 years ago from london

      You have great potential. I know that English is not native to you, and yet your poetry comes through. Extremely beautiful!

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      torrilynn 5 years ago

      dghbrh,

      really nice poem that you have here

      thanks for the read.

      very beautiful and sensational

      voted up

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful journey .I love this poem.Up

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