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Ember

Updated on January 31, 2015
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

O' my love

Like ember

Slowly

Withering away

I am,

With wind

And ice

I will end up

Quickly

Aches.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 2 years ago from Reno NV

      At first I expected to see "Ashes" as your closing word. But then I realized that after the "withering" comes a whole world of "aches," Heartache being the first thing that comes to my mind. Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks for the comment.As we know love is fleeting and it fades so quickly when someone doesn't care about it.

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      wow.. again simply wow!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Sir Frank,

      Thanks so much for the visit.I appreciate it.Have a wonderful day there !

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      samuel hodges 2 years ago from Winston-Salem NC

      Deep.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Samuel,

      Thanks for dropping by and commented.

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Its been a while since I have stopped by--so sorry! This is gorgeous!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      AudreyHowitt,

      No no it's okey..don't worry ,I understand :)

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