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Evermore (tanka)

Updated on June 30, 2013

Lost in the evening

Soft melody in the air

Fragrant memories

Of flowers dancing in fields

Across the vast evermore


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      shanmarie 3 years ago

      Very romantic and I love the image used.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      The scene is so picturesque.

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      W1totalk 4 years ago

      First thing I thought, why are women so fragrant? Great tanka.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      You are a master of words.

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      Cory Zacharia 4 years ago

      Exquisite words that open the heart.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This was so lovely and the pic too. I pearled this.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Fragrant memories are the most vivid... how beautiful!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Another beautiful tanka. Loved it and the picture is so serene...

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      I do admire people like yourself who can write exquisitely in different poetic genres...oh, and there's the flowers again, I love it!

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Very awesome my friend !

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I can just imagine myself sitting quietly in the swing, under the stars and listening to all the sounds of the night.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful my friend.Voted up

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, this paints a wonderful picture of contemplation and contentment.

      Beautifully done.

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      So romantic, Mhatter99!! : ) Love it! I had to vote it up and beautiful!!