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Updated on January 19, 2014

You’re ticking all round my clock

I’m in circles of your love

I feel you in

Baby the distance is killing me

And I suffocate

in the air that I breathe

You’re in every particle of mist

Try to detach myself

but you bring me back to life

Resuscitate me with your kiss

I’m stupid

I know you hate me

I’m too dense

I know you love me

You’re a vapor I wanna sigh

My cigar when I chill numb

I paint you in

But sometimes I forget your smile

And I cry a hundred

when I can’t touch your hand

You’re in every song and sound

Try not to miss yourself

But you’re underneath my skin

My spine has memorized you babe

I’m stupid

I know you hate me

I’m too dense

I know you love me

I get closer when I run away

I inhale you when I moan

My heart’s screaming when I don’t speak

I’m scared I couldn’t let you go

I don’t just love you

Too deep now

to never get drowned…

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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      4 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you for reading my hubs today. God bless you!

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      Caroline Marie 

      4 years ago

      Amazing words. I love the beat of your poem.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      4 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks DDE :)

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      Devika Primić 

      4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A beautifully written poem your true words show great meaning.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      Oh one of those moments.. I'm glad this took your breath away. I'm so happy today reading your beautiful comments. They inspire me to write more :)

    • BeyondMax profile image


      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      What an amazing imagery, wow, takes my breath away! Fehl, it's a wonderful raw heartfelt poem!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      @Enigmatic - Thank you. Always happy to see you and your meaningful comments. :)

      @Nikki - Hopes what you felt was awesomely good LOL Thank you Nikki :)

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      Really Amazing. I loved every bit. Lord knows I've felt that way many times.

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      You are such a soulful seeker I smile quietly at your 'in public' search.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you Ben. Perhaps it would be more powerful if it was put into real music/song :)

    • BenWritings profile image


      7 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      damn this is awesome

      thanks for following me and commenting :]

      this poem/song creates an odd feeling , not really sure what, but it's powerful


    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      the title says it all :)


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      7 years ago

      F(ehl)L(oves)Ash.. :)

      We're the only two people that understood that from the beginning.. I love you too baby :) x

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      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful love here Blaise! God bless you dear Blaise! Be safe and warm!

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      7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Beautiful and I love this very much. You made my day so colorful with this poem. Thanks for share with us. I give my vote to you. Cheers.......

      Blessing and hugs,

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Hi Cassy! Lovely hat :) Very well said moi friend. I agree. Trademark huh LOL Thanks a lot! Cheers and happy holidays!

      Amy Taylor hi! Thank you. Looking forward to read your hubs.

      Hi Lionel! Oh thanks for the great words :)

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      7 years ago

      Excellent, respect is due. I really enjoyed that, thank.

    • AmyTaylor profile image


      7 years ago

      so different but I love this. I like when I can relate to writing and I definitly relate to this. Something so far yet so out of reach....sigh....your great

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Aw, Fehl, this is a great poem, you write so fluidly as always. I am intrigued by how being happy is scary. Yes, sometimes we can be afraid it might shatter or be more fragile than we think - but I believe we feel the fear and love anyway. We should be never afraid to love or open our hearts. I love the honesty here too. That is your trademark, Fehl. Great writing as always. Cheers! have a great day! :) XO

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you for always reading my works Dim :) You're just so lovely and amazing. XX

      Hi Prof A! I admire your special words :) Thanks a lot! XX

      Acaetna, always exploring and Katrinasui thank you guys!

      Hello Cathy! My lyrics just like any could convey so much meanings and it's so interesting to hear your views and interpretations.. Yea I love this person and I was going through a lot when I wrote this. But it wasn't torture at all. I was profoundly happy. And sometimes being profoundly happy is scary. Oh I'm weird am I? Well I don't care really. It's me. And it's my song and I'm in love.

      and yeah I'm in deep :) XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh to be close yet so far, to be the one but not yet "taken", and to know and yet be unsure. That is torture, and the best thing to do is not fall off that tightrope, Fehl. You really love this person, and the indecision is tough. Your poetry is always frank and honest. You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant way of putting things, cos no matter how confused you are, it somehow makes sense reading it. Deep is the word here - you are in so deep. Great poetry. :) XO

    • katrinasui profile image


      7 years ago

      Wow! Its not only different but interesting. I liked it.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow,so different,yet very intriguing.I liked it.

    • acaetnna profile image


      7 years ago from Guildford

      Wow - I totally loved this.

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      Mentalist acer 

      7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      AHhh,the confusion of love is a stupifying phenomena,lol,you put that to text beautifuly,Blaise.;)

    • Dim Flaxenwick profile image

      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      Wow. Sometimes you manage to pull something even MORE special out of the hat than ususal.... Thank you for that wonderful poem. Take care. x


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