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Fallen Angel

Updated on June 29, 2011


On page five, she’s on

On the cover

Back and forth

In between words…

My head was spinning

I’ve been saying her name..


Rolled up my sleeves

I’m in love with you

I told her


The angel smiled and kissed me

It was wrong

But felt a million right


Night sky stars

filled our blanket of kisses

I knew heaven will take her…


I love you

to the moon and back

She told me



In an instant she’s gone

Suddenly I’m back to

where I started…


Chasing fireflies at 9 am

On a corner

she stood

In between hi and hello

I already gave all

my secrets away


All locked up

I’m fallin’ again

either I fall…


The angel embraced me

We gulped the night

The sweetest kind of wrong


Cupid aligned the stars

Heaven won’t be heaven

without her by my side


I love you, Fehl

Says the soft voice

in the airwaves…


Suddenly I’m closer to

where I started…







I'm chasing after you...


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Copyright © 2011 by Fehl Dungo All Rights Reserved

Bold texts taken from my fave, Hanging by a Moment (by Lifehouse)

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      What a unique style, keeps me on the sensual edge till the last line, wow, beautiful!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Aww thank you Freya. I'm so happy to receive compliments especially from a great poet like you :)

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      Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Your choice of words always so flawless. Hard to not admire your ability in creating tense inside your sweet love scene. Bravo, Blaise!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you for the gorgeous comments Caroline :) Haunting is a very nice word

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Gorgeous poem very unique style :) Love your writing. It kind of has a haunting beauty to it.

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      omigosh like a kiss in the darkness..that's so sexy! Raw and perfect, that is you, too Marina :)thank you so much.

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      Marina Lester 5 years ago

      "Gulped the night and it was the sweetest kind of wrong" WoW! That line define a lot of this piece for me, put every other line together beautifully. Like a kiss in darkness this poem finds its reader... raw and perfect, the sweetest kind of wrong...

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      OMG you got hugs for saying that :) Thank you Phoebe. Hope you read my other stuffs. See you around

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      Phoebe Pike 5 years ago

      That was one of the best poems I have ever read! Your storytelling skills are remarkable!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thank you so much for the awesome wishes. :)

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Enjoyed the poem, it's Awesome. Keep it up.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Yup I seem to be putting too much of what's in me maybe that's why it turns up so well :) Thank you lovely Dim xx

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      You write so well. You seem to put your whole being into your poetry.

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Always happy to see you Acaetnna. Your poems are so romantic :)

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow, great work - I loved it!

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Oh wow thanks so much Kenneth :) So happy my hub is so loved :) Thank you. xx

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      Kenneth Avery 5 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      blaise . . .AM--AZ-ING HUB! Caught my heart and kept it. LOVED is not adequate to describe how I really feel right now about this....so please accept, GREAT, DEEP, MOVING, TOUCHING only a few adjectives to describe your talent. Peace and I will look for you later on hubs.

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Awful P :)

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Fantástico~

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      Fehl Dungo 5 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks a lot Jami :)

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      jami l. pereira 5 years ago

      Beautifully crafted , thanks for sharing , voted up

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Oh I almost forgot it pumps blood coz when I met my soul mate, it's been pumping honey... :)

      Thanks for reading. Your works are awesome.

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      QudsiaP1 6 years ago

      All through the years the heart beats and pumps blood and then one fine day it discovers it has more purpose than just pumping blood.

      It brings you close to your life source and helps you on the journey to find your soul mate.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Yay, we're complete now. :)

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Curly is right here. Can't wait to read the interview, Fehl! ^_^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Now I'm seeing things in 3D... ^,^

      This is awesome! Where's is Curly? LOL

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh Fehl, we will start and just get stuck in. This is awesome. Heh. ^,^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Yup Pottermore is a brilliant idea :) Sounds like a game and a website of all Harry Potter stuff..

      Yup, I've got some hot pizza :) (Fehl hops in the middle..arm on Cathy, the other on Cassy..) So, are we gonna start the Sorcerer's stone or jump to the Hallows? ^,^

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Aw cheer up, J.K. Rowling will be adding some things to the Pottermore website. Who knows what she will do next? It's rumored to be a possible Detective story of some kind...!

      Yup, we got the popcorn and drinks! Ya got some Pizza too? Have a seat in the middle! Heh! Movie marathon...h'mm...yes....that too! ^,^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hi KR! Thank you. What's happening with FB's poet society? Gonna be changed to a new group?

      Hi Peach Muffin! Yup, it's sad. I dont wanna think bout it. Oh I wish I was watching with you guys.. :c Cathy popping the popcorn yeah? LOL It's gonna be a movie er..marathon. :) Save the couch for me pleaze.. ^,^

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Harry Potter was great, Fehl! Sad that there'll be no more after this. We are going to re-watch all the films all over again. Cathy's popping the popcorn! LOL!

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      Karen Russell 6 years ago

      I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING IT WITH OUR GROUP, HOTEP>PEACE!

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Likewise. Oh yeah would be cool to disappear in the fireplace and be in London in a sec. My crazy horcruxes I'm gonna tell you in the email.. Mwah! (Minka says hi to you and Curly)

      Hi EM! haha You're gonna love it. I'm gonna shut up now lol :)

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      SHHHHHH, some of us have to wait til Tuesday to see it.... no spoilers... ;)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh wow, we are going this evening to see Harry, Ron and Hermione. This is my movie of the year for me. I am such a huge fan. I am going to re-read the books all over again. Oh I need an owl and a name for him or her. Heh. (Wishes I could use the fireplace flu system for instant travel local cinema, you and I could watch together. I could bring the popped popcorn and drinks...and muffins. LOL.)

      I miss you too baby. Mwah. ^_^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      I loved the Deathly Hallows Part 2. It's loveful and there were kisses..I didn't need Minka (my owl) I needed an elf to bring my baby there so I could chase my own horcruxes...^_^ Oh gosh, I missed you!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Harry Potter last night. I haven't seen it - we're seeing this weekend. I'd love rocking the movie house...Heh. ^_^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Last Harry Potter tonight. Let's rock the movie house hun mMmm.. ^,^

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Muffins, peaches...pancakes...I'm hungry...let's eat in Starbucks. ^_^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Aw thanks a lot Randy :) You always rock! Mwah!

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Blaise I loved the way you played with numbers in this. And this stanza rocked:

      "Chasing fireflies at 9 am

      On a corner

      she stood

      In between hi and hello

      I already gave all

      my secrets away"

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      She's my blueberry..you're my peach.. :) Well since you're like Peachy (from moi Stargazer) *winks*

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Yes, did someone mention Hermes? I got a message... LOL! Okay it was gmail, I'm following the hub! Heh! Peach Muffin! I love this! I wish Cathy would call me that! ROFL! Love that! ^,^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Hermes..the messenger of the gods.. ^,^

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hehehe. "Hermes"? LOL. That is so cool, Fehl. You are typical...deflect the attention away from yourself. LOL. Fehl, you are very awesome and amazing. Mwah.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      *blushes* Hello Hermes..Peach muffin! Thank you. I'm so happy you loved this one. You've been so amazing since the beginning! Mwah! Me the greatest? Thanks. I'm not. :)

      Hi Enigmatic! Oh wow I'm gonna go take a look :)

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Left a little something by way of poetry out on my front step...if ya pass by...take a lookie-loo.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      This is a standout hub and what a lovely warmth that bursts out from it. Your love Poetry is always beautiful and so impressive, and told with your wonderful soft lilting and easy-flowing style that I love so much. Wow! Feh, you are just more and more amazing to me these days! Honestly! You're the Greatest! :) XOXO

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Since you're around now, can I request some poetry pleaze? :)

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      been keepin a low profile ;) But can't help but comment when I am around.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      thought you forgot bout me...

      ok, shame on me...lol

      so happy to see you whenever I'm back XO

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      blaise... done it again... shame on you for reaching our souls...and hearts.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Yay! I already rated your medieval hub awesome and beautiful hehe

      Wow, I'm honored. :) Blaise GPS can play music, too. lol Song above now playing..

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      on it as we speak...love this stuff ... wAy cool!!!

      only blaise' gps can guide my black ferrari from the moon in medieval times..

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      hey hey bbRed! I love the black Ferrari than the red. They say red cars are prone to accidents. But whatever. lol Pretty imagery..black Ferrari zoooming to the moon and back..waking up sexy angels.. O, there I saw you with one my friend. lol

      You're closer to where you started? Mmmm? lol

      Glad that my words guide you like a GPS hehe

      Cheers! Happy to see you, bb! Have you done the medieval hub?

      Hello Lionel! I appreciate your usual visits. Thanks so much for always reading. I'm so happy you love my poems. I'm back writing again.. Thanks! you're awesome! XO

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      lionel1 6 years ago

      Your poems are so deep and so wonderful, I love your poems. Thank you for another amazing post.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      bbred's ferrari turns shades of black, "to the moon and back"....sliding deeper...angel's draw knack...love as everything...dreamers turned back...held in a vision so grand where...

      ....

      "The angel embraced me...We gulped the night...The sweetest kind of wrong"....

      ...

      "Suddenly I’m closer to....where I started…"

      Your words guide bbred's flight through love and it fits like a glove...

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Thanks Two Poles! God you’re awesome :)

      Hello bbRed! Can I call you bbRed? lol Glad you loved this one. Thank you. I love writing bout love, too. It’s the main spice in our writings. Sliding..um take care of the Ferrari please hehe

      Thirtyone, thanks man!

      Hi Prof A! lol ok my Guardian, I’m gonna think bout the next book..I wonder, are you published? Thank you so much. You always impress me. XO

      Wow, I’m so happy to see you here Bella. You’re amazing. Thank you so much. :)

      Hi, Ruby! Thank you for the beautiful words. Your comments are always inspiring. :)

      Hi, Nikki! Aw that’s magical..midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos, wow! Your mood is set..Get your pen and write bout that beautiful imagery :) You’re damn creative! Thanks so much, my friend. Always happy to see you around. XO

      Hi Cathy! *smiles at you* So glad you loved this. I love your comment here..You always get me, babe. Hmmm what about the page 5 thing? Not sure if I’m thinking what you’re thinking.. :D Email me. Mwah.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Fehl, I love this new hub. Magical and mystical and so amazing as always. Angels have such an effect on us. We can become so attracted to Angels... and we love them so much. I loved these lines "The sweetest kind of wrong..." and this:

      "Cupid aligned the stars

      Heaven won’t be heaven

      without her by my side..."

      So beautiful. I am so loving your writing these days. :) I think I figured out the page 5 thing too. LOL. Mwah. I love romantic poetry.

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      awww this is so beautiful, it paints a lovely picture, a midsummer nights dream, breaking into dawn, chasing fireflies and halos.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You're an Angel, and your words are beautiful.

      Smiles

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Great verses and word usage!!

      bella

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Ok Fehl:

      All locked up

      I’m fallin’ again

      either I fall…

      I'm going to get my keys and open this gate,but the next time I see you on the cloud way speeding with your hyper-wings I'm gonna lock you up in this feathered cell writing poems for Guardian Angel Mentalist acer until you fill another book...now get going.;)

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      thirtyone 6 years ago from Sao Paulo - Brazil

      Great poem!

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      A million right indeed....

      I so enjoyed this.. had to read it several times..

      I love writing about love Blaise', and you my dear friend are helping to show me the way...

      No wonder you're loved so much...I feel myself sliding as well...hah.....you're amazing..!!!

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      Two Poles 6 years ago from Morgantown, West Virginia

      Very beautiful