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Falling Out of Love

Updated on November 9, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

I'm falling out of love

Slowly falling out of love

With you

The leaves are dying

My love

I'm falling out of love

With you

What we had before

Is no more

All the light

All the joy

Turned into darkness

And despair

It saddens me

Beyond belief

That it had to happen

This way

But I am trying

To accept it

You don't act like you

Love me anymore

I feel alone

All the time

Even with you there

Where did you go

You just

Disappeared

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you so much Audra! :)

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      AudraLeigh 5 years ago

      A beautifully penned poem! Your words are simple, yet so powerful! Writing lets you express your broken heart better than any other way. I love this so much, I have to share!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Blossom thank so much for the support my friend. :)

      Hi Shining very true. It's heartbreaking when it fades away. :)

      Hi Eiddwen thanks so much. :)

      Hi Epi even though it's November your day sounds heavenly. Take care dear friend and thanks for stopping by. :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ......I think I know this feeling right now - sweet Caroline - as always you write with your delicate heart and your mind guides you in writing these beautiful words - sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada at 11:11am with first cup of coffee, some nice baroque music, a glorious day of sun with my two cats outside and time for a walk on my beach -although I still consider November the gateway month to winter ...

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      So wonderfully composed;thank you for sharing and have a great day.

      Eddy.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Oh my creative friend. Haven't we all experienced the pain in our heart when we realize what we originally fell in love with has faded away. Heartbreak and so honest and in tune.

      Great job

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A great description of an uncomfortable position to be in - in poetry, too. Enjoyed it.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      So true about falling out of love. Thanks Leslie! I love your style and spirit! :)

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      It is a wee bit frightening how easily one can fall out of love...

      almost as quickly as one fell into it..

      the heart is a tender entity - it bruises so easily..

      love your style, Caroline..

      Direct and to the point - yet - so beautifully woven!

      me gusta!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thanks Ruby. :)

      Thanks Jim. :)

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      James W. Nelson 5 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Very beautiful poem, Caroline, the song too. It has happened to me, more than once, but just suddenly you know, and you finally start...falling out of love....

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Falling out of love is so sad, but a bunch of us can relate i'm sure. Beautiful poetry..Thank you Caroline.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Michael that is a great question to ask. Thanks for reading and leaving your insightful comment. :)

      Hi Angela thank you for taking the time out to stop and read. :)

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      Angela Kane 5 years ago from Las Vegas, Nevada

      Very beautiful poem, your other poems are also very good. I look forward to your next one.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ahh, love , the many forms we look for it and when we find it it always isn't what we thought it would be. The questions that we always ask ourselves. is it them or is it me .??

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Thank you Gypsy. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Have had a few just vanish on me too. I liked the sentiments and video. Passing this on.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Hi Frank thank you! :)

      Hi XStatic thank you! :)

      Hi Eric LOL thank you for the comment and reading. :)

      Hi Mhatter I am sorry it haunts you. Maybe it was just meant to be. Thank you for stopping. :)

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Believe it,many many moons ago, a boy who was me did this. A mistake that haunts me again.

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      Eric Dierker 5 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      This is not depressing at all to me. It is closure and moving on up. I am a wacked out old man, and the greatest thing my lovers ever did for me was let me go. So I kinda like to say Jumping out of love. But I get it some folks can't let go.

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      That is such a sad, desolate feeling. Having been there, I can relate. Up!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      what an emotional strong raw, poem .. a great write :)

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