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Find You

Updated on February 19, 2013
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On the brake down

What do you see

Wanting to be

Near you

Not rushing

Not wanting to jump

On the edge

Where are you

What do you see

Do you want me to find you

Where are you

Should I break down

To find you

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      intense!

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Btrbell. :)

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Great words ; I vote up and share.

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Awesome and nicely done.Voted up.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Powerful! Very nice.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Hauntingly written, deep...I liked it!!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful and emotional.

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Intense and emotional write...voted awesome:-))

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Hi Eiddwen thank you. :)

      Hi James thank you. :)

      Hi Wayne thank you. :)

      Hi Ruby thank you. :)

      Hi Gypsy thank you. :)

      Hi Valleypoet thank you. :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      I love the flow and emotional journey here. Your writing is always wonderful, Caroline.

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Astra. I always appreciate your visit. :)

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