Fired Breath
The blue green hem slowly sinks
eyes closing through languid coolness
lips part, enticing me in
inevitable touch burns, coolness fires.
Jue Ju is one of the oldest of the Chinese patterns and in the 3rd century AD the Jue Ju was very popular. It often carried "suggestively erotic themes".
Line length: 5 words per line
Lines per stanza: 4
Theme: Often suggestive of erotic love
Rhyme scheme: couplets or unrhymed
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