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"Flash of the Sun"
...And i saw that flash of the sun today
and my entire existence was made whole.
As though I now had purpose,
it nearly touched my soul,
those eyes of radiance,
how they pierce me so,
and though the sun may set tonight,
I'll never let that feeling go.
In an instant the light was gone,
as if it had never been there before,
But I knew all along,
I was watching an angel soar.
Her eyes did light upon me,
brightening up my life,
and with every wave of the ocean,
I saw with a better sight,
The beauty of the world,
my surroundings so surreal.
In one moment, one flash of light,
all my wounds had healed.
All my burdens seemed weightless,
all my woes, no longer worries.
I was at peace, I was calm,
no need to rush or hurry.
Everything was clear,
everything was as it was meant to be.
And to this day that flash, that angel,
I have yet again to see.
She left me with a gift,
a reflection of all the good in life,
and if you're fortunate enough,
You'll catch a glimpse before the sun rise.
© 2011 Nikki Wicked
Comments
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thanks again nighthag. hope you read bb's poem too, that was my inspiration.
This was beautiful and inspiring, a great poem
You don't fool me!! Us little devils know each other all too well...
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hmmm i dont think it was me bb....i'm no angel ;) lol
I thought I saw the angel Nikki in this morning's sunrise flash... ;)
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thank you ray, for that. and i dont see the walmart thingie, but yes most likely spam, i wouldnt click that.
i really like your style of writing..you assemble words artfully .
Ray
PS under the comment box on this hub is a flashing winner of walmart gift card . prompting to be clicked on. I don't think its suppose to be there just a FYI.
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thanks a bunch fay
What a beautiful poem, Nikki. I love your writing style.
up/beautiful
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thank you bb. im happy you feel that way. im very pleased with what i came up with, and i cant wait to see what you come up with in response. so get up off that floor, those better be happy tears and get to work! lol and i knew what you meant bb.
thanks to ben and skiface as well. im glad skiface can like some of my not so dark poetry as well lol and Ben as always I apreciate you taking the time to stop by and comment. its one of my fave too.
That was no doubt about it - geez :}
lovely, Nikki. one of my favorites of yours! beautifully done :]
That was beautiful, Nikki, your writing style gets more interesting every time i stop by.
Oh for cryin out loud. Bella's going to scold me as I'm crying once again.
I literally have broken fingers I've worked so hard all my life, and never in those tens of thousand of hours have I been so touched by someone's response to something I've done.
That was exquisitely beautiful. I am at a loss for words (and that's a rare thing indeed).
I'll have to write something more appropriately beautiful in response, but it'll take me some time to get up off the floor.
You are an angel sent to me from heaven. I have doubt about it...
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i sure will try aceatnna thanx
It sounds as though you will always be in full colour and vibrating with life. Great work here.
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thnk u bella, i hope he likes it! and thanks acer, i never want to be grey, i wanna be full of color and life!
From grey to gold,your secret Nikki,is told.;)
VEry nice Nikkigurl, I love your opening quote of bb, It gave it so much more and your poem was just peacful as the still waters on a warm sunny day....
smiles :)
bella
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