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Flawless

Updated on May 14, 2019
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My name is William and I have been writing poetry and lyrics for so many years. I'd like to be published and accomplished writer.

Flawless

Uncover the skin, do it again

Let me feel what's inside you

Raw flesh, leg covered mesh

A beautiful nakedness seen

Motion detected, ears infested

More it's coming true

The horror is rising

The horror is rising

How many trends can you think new

The devil came up he said

I was the man

Said I was put here to please you

It's a devotion in my eyes

I'm flawless, your flawless

With myself, will it happen?

It's up to me my flawless victory

The horror is rising

The horror is rising true

You came to me with open arms

What else was, I

Was I , to do? I'm clueless it's all

It's all cause of you

The horror is inside me

The horror is inside me

My flawless intentions

Scary detentions

Flawless records

Loud bass cords

I'm the shepherd

You're the victim

This flawless intuition

Is all that I am

Loud words

Horror stories

Is it all true

Stop the immaturity

Inside you all the purity

Falling away, decaying

Nothing inside me is new

All horror stories of pain

My life dies, there's nothing to gain

From my flawless emotions

A Darker Side To Poetry 1-Poll

What in your opinion do you believe drives me mostly and gives me inspiration/s

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© 2009 Dom Shadows

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    • Katrina_26 profile image

      Katrina_26 

      9 years ago from Seward, Pa

      I know what it is to be hurt repeatadly. It really does suck when you give someone your heart and they tear it to ribbons. I am in the process of a divorce when I was married for three years.

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      nicole 

      9 years ago

      hey that was a good read. Now let me tell you about being a push over try your best not to do it, I do for others all the time and when it comes time for me to get help no one wants to help, I have a big heart and it tends to get stomped on all the time. hang in there it will get better. I wasn't sure if you were asking me or the person I wrote the question to but I am a SAGGATARIUS OR HOWEVER YOU SPELL IT

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      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      When I write i do, I try to just let it flow. I never stop writing till I feel its done. Also I hardly ever make "rough copies" or fix my work.. =)

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      Cris A 

      9 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      let it flow...

    • DomShadows profile imageAUTHOR

      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      You are all right. BTW. Forgive me for my absence I have been some what busy. I suppose I'm one of those "original" one of a kind, ya' know? Like no one seems to be like me and that's great and all but, we all have our better halves.

      --> Wanna know something- everyone reading this shit? I'm not bragging. Hell, it's immature & ignorant. But... I have a crazy bad temper, though I'll never hurt a women, child, nor an animal. Let a male though rub me the wrong way, once. It's pathetic, why am I so forgive full of women and children but not my own self-gender?

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      Denizee 

      9 years ago

      They say nice guys finish last. We as poets have emotions others don't seem to understand. I'm a giver, therefore people take away from me - but, if you push to break free of the being used pattern you just might find someone to compliment the person you are, and live without the horror.

      Be free to live in your own skin.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      9 years ago from Great Britain

      Taht's what I was thinking Dom. You shouldn't be a 'push over' for anyone. Maybe because you are a loving kinda person you are seen as 'soft' by some.

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      eyeofh 

      9 years ago from New Jersey

      It's scary how much of your "story" is like my "story". Hang in there though and don't ever be afraid to be "you". People might take advantage but always remember that what comes around goes around. The good that you put out into the world WILL come back to you...until then all you need to do is keep leaving the bad feelings you have on the page...that is where they belong and can be useful. Keep up the great work!

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      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      Well thanks for the inspiration. I just got out of a three year relationship and I have so much wrote on her I could fill a book. It's like I let people take advantage of me you know? LIke sometimes I could be a push over.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      9 years ago from Great Britain

      I think you will find a good woman, you show so much depth of feeling. The kind of women who can't see that in you or don't appreciate it are not worth having. You deserve a good'un. cheers

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      tantrum 

      9 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Good women don't grow on trees LOL. If you don't look for ,you'll certainly find! :)

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      Dom Shadows 

      9 years ago from Zanesville, Ohio

      It sounds like the same old story but the "horror" is a broken heart. I'm a good man, a good person but people wanna do me so wrong. I really need to find me a good women..=)

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      tantrum 

      9 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      Why so much horror ? Isn't life beautiful ?

      I liked it. the rhythm of it. Thanks !

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