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Dark Poetry: Flipping Chapters

Updated on June 14, 2013

As I skim through this story,

Flipping through chapters,

I wonder why I should complete it,

For in the end nothing really matters.


I've been writing it now,

For over 30 years,

The ending is so obvious,

Why should I care.


There are billions of stories out there,

Almost identical to mine,

So why find the words,

To write another line.


I'll just write two words,

And lay down my pen,

Set the book to the last page,

So people can read "The End".


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    • sheilanewton profile image

      sheilanewton 

      6 years ago from North Shields, UK

      Love this. It says everything about the writer's/writing life, doesn't it?

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      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thanks for the encouragement. Some days you just feel like giving up.

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I have not read that particular poem. I'll see if i can look it up online. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

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      Support Med. 

      6 years ago from Michigan

      Welcome to Hubpages, by the way, and hope you enjoy!!

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      Support Med. 

      6 years ago from Michigan

      "There are billions of stories out there,

      Almost identical to mine,

      So why find the words,

      To write another line."

      Every writer is unique. The world goes round and round:Much of what is said is the same, but that one certain writer can say it for a certain reader to relate to, enjoy and understand. You are amongst those unique writers whom that certain reader is looking to find. Keep writing. v/r

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      Jill Spencer 

      6 years ago from United States

      Hi PHILLYDREAMER--Impressed with your ability to maintain and extend the metaphor in a seemingly effortless manner. Although the tones are different, your poem reminds me a bit of a Mari Evans poem (called "Metaphor," I think) that begins, "Morning is a blank sheet of paper." Are you familiar with it?

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thanks for the encouragement. I'm still writing, but sometimes it's hard when you feel like you aren't accomplishing things.

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      Karen Silverman 

      6 years ago

      Write it Philly...every story is special in it's own way!

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thanks Kristie, are you gonna try out the poetry challenge.

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      kclaar 

      6 years ago from Tyrone, Pennsylvania

      Hey Philly, I'm right there with you. I feel a little intimidated over here too. Fantastic piece you have written. God Bless!

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thanks Vhinaya, after reading all the bad things about Triond, and my own personal experiences i just can't keep writing for them.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      6 years ago from Nepal

      I have read you works on Triond. I will eagerly follow your writings on hubpages.

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Thank you Luis, I am enjoying myself over here so far. Please let me know if you have any tricks that can help a new user. I'm trying to re-establish myself on a new site as i had issues with the old site I wrote for. Everything looks so different I find I'm a little intimidated.

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      Luis E Gonzalez 

      6 years ago from Miami, Florida

      Welcome to HubPages. Nice to have a poet among us

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I'm glad you took something positive out of it, when I wrote it a few hours ago I was feeling moody LOL.

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      Kadmiels 

      6 years ago from Florida

      i actually reflect this with my own life and how each chapter comes to a come to an end..

    • PHILLYDREAMER profile imageAUTHOR

      Jose Velasquez 

      6 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem, and curious as to what you took from it.

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      Kadmiels 

      6 years ago from Florida

      i love original poems you can really tell a lot by how a person describes things in poems thanks for continuing your wonderful art

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