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Forever Never (poem)

Updated on January 5, 2013

Somehow the world he knew had changed this day

He wanders through the realms of what or how

For answers which his reason won’t allow

What was it now which calls his mind to stray

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What was it which was eating at his soul

Its nature or what purpose did it weave

Destruction or some pleasure to conceive

And with it gone did something fill the hole

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It felt to him some answer to a prayer

A flip-side to a long unwanted coin

To share the fate of mate forever join

A sacrifice for evil something fair

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And so it was the world had something lost

And their forever never was the cost

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      Gustave Kilthau 4 years ago from USA

      Mhatter99 - An interesting poem with interesting questions.

      Gus :-)))

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Dear Martin.. such beauty in your words shares something special with each word comes majesty and worth.

      Blessings my friend

      Debbie

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      Lillian K. Staats 4 years ago from Wasilla, Alaska

      You have a gift. Please, for me, just TRY not to rhyme? lily

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      A very interesting poem with some endearing words. Voted up,

      Jan

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      Dr Cil 4 years ago

      How intriguing! voted up!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Forever-never, interesting indeed...

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Great job, Martin. Things like this can easily occur.

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      Well done. Unanswered questions sometimes do lead to a wandering at least of the soul in search of them. Voted up++

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      I agree, well done, Hatter. I wonder what drives people to do unwarranted or harmful things to themselves and others too. Thanks for sharing!

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      What was lost -- perhaps a memory or love? Very creative and mysterious lines that lead to perhaps another time or relationship.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      You have a sad side to you Martin--so many levels here

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      Mike Robbers 4 years ago from London

      This rings so true for me and I felt that I could totally identify with this. Very inspirational. voted up :)

      Michelle,, thanks for the U2 video clip a well ! I love this song :)

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      Aga 4 years ago

      Deep... A bit dark... Sometimes we have suffer consequences of our actions, sometimes they change our world forever... Voted Beautiful!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Mysteriously intriguing. there are many questions in this life which never seem to get answered.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Wow, this takes reading more than once to grasp the depth from which it comes. I take it evil overcame and cost the lovers their innocent time together. So true of many relationships, really.

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      bizarrett81 4 years ago from Maine

      Beautiful poem. You write lovely words and I wish I had more time to read all of your Hubs!

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