Forgiveness: A Poem with artwork
Days of sleep
Many tears
To love me
I must forgive you
Doubts
Mistrust
Hatred
Hurt me more
than you
Depression
will not win
You are forgiven
I am a bit wiser
Love takes a hit
but
survives.
©LMY 5.4.2012
Comments
AUTHORSilentReed, thank you!
"Love takes a hit but survives" We all have been "survivors" at one time or more in our lives. Despite the scars we eventually heal after learning to forgive. Love this poem.
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tillsontitan, thank you! I really appreciate your words!
I am happy to hear you are on the mend...though beautiful your poems have been showing some pain. It is good to see "depression will not win"! God bless. Voted up and beautiful.
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Gypsy, thank you for the comment and votes! Love can be trying and this heart is still a little damaged. We are working on it.
Voted up and beautiful. Glad to know that love survives just sometimes it can be very trying and the heart may be unforgiving.
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Faith Reaper, thank you very much! You keep me going!
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rahul0324, yes, it's tough! Thank you for the comment!
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kj force, thank you! It definitely helps to write it all out! Great therapy!
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Dee aka Nonna, thank you! I'm so glad you got the meaning of my poem!
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kennynext, real love is tough! No one ever said it would be easy. Thanks so much for the comment!
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Michael, I've had some very bad days, but I'm on the mend right now. Thank you for your understanding and kind offer! I appreciate you and everything you do!
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Sandra, I keep trying to move forward! Thank you!
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Michele, thank you for the wise words! They mean a lot!
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Bill, thank you so much!
Love will persevere, especially with forgiveness. Well done once again! In His Love, Faith Reaper
Love is the one feeling in this world... if personified and spoken off... the man who can take all the bullets and bombs on himself and still live to tell the tale and wait for another!
Beautiful write!
Very poignant..you appear to be moving through this transition by the tones of your poems. I commend you..
I know this has not been an easy road...keep the faith..
Forgiveness...such a beautiful words...strong and happy and sad. I sensed all that in your wonderful poem. Voted awesome.
Sometimes love comes and goes, but real love stays forever
lisa, my lovely. are you alright ? your work seems to have taken a turn to the way i write. or is it just me. fear not michael is always here for you my sweet. want me to write you some bright lines?
love ya,
Lisa,
you know that.
Michael
A beautiful poem and another step forward in your journey.
True love never dies. We may, but love does not. Thank you again for a wonderful hub.
Love always survives if we want it to. How many hits have we taken over a lifetime and still...we keep moving forward until we find true love.
Love your poetry my friend!
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