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Forgivness and love -a poem

Updated on February 11, 2010

Don't let an argument
lie on a bed of nails.
In the morning our
memories will spit venom,
the door will slam and
the weight of a thousand
weeping souls,
will sit heavily upon
our shoulders,
day and night,
until the wind blows lightly
to calm the storm and
the door re-opens and
the light will cradle our
embracing faces and
together our eyes will
speak in solitude of
forgiveness and love.

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Thank you Leptirela, much appreciated.

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      Leptirela 7 years ago from I don't know half the time

      :) aaah peace.... you only find it after you forgive , this lil selection of words you married there , its wonderfull I love your style :)

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Very true MissRio, thank you.

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      MissRio 7 years ago from Vero Beach

      nice work, forgiveness is the way to embrace all other emotions and LOVe.. There is only LOve Ultimately..:)

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Thank you stricktlydating.

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      StricktlyDating 7 years ago from Australia

      I love this poem!

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Thank you again poetlorraine.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      b e a u t i f u l. Don't let the sun set in a provoked state, is the biblical version of this, Wise words, loving your work, wow

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      Sherbet Penny 7 years ago from Galway, Ireland.

      Agree, you have to give stubbornness the boot too and I have certainly learned my lessons along the way, thank you for comment.

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      blondepoet 7 years ago from australia

      How true that is. They say we should never go to bed angry....yea I believe in forgiving too....unforgiving really consumes you with so much crap...it's not the easiest thing to do, but it definitely saves your soul.