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From the bedroom to the Bus stop

Updated on July 1, 2013

your smiles turned to chases

your hugs to embraces

your kisses from warm to hot

that will never by me be forgot

on my arm you majestically lent

im completely took in by your scent

I paraded you around like a queen

took you to sights you'd never seen

behind that sweet smile you knew

not everything you told me was true

but while its me that your kissing

its another you are missing

then i must not make a fuss

you're in a hurry to catch the next bus

wave your hand blow me some lies

whats coming next wont be a surprise

first your impossible to get on the phone

then ill never quite catch you at home

ill arrive when you've just gone out the door

ill soon get the feeling you dont wanna see me no more..

ill plead for some kind of token

its been a while since we have last spoken

all i get from you is a total swerve

to ignore me you sure have a nerve

now im stuck in some kind of void

its really made me quite annoyed

there's only a cold empty feeling

you leave me standing senses reeling

but you on the otherhand are OK

about me to your new guy plenty to say

my ears will burn and glow red

with the lies about me to others thats said

ill be the one who gets all the blame

ill be the one not you who'll hold their head in shame

while you vanish out of view

majestically on the arm of somebody new

while your life to you suddenly matters

you'll leave mine in absolute tatters

shaking my head in realisation and disgust

it wasn't love i had with you only......lust?

you invaded my personal space

crystal eyes that shone in my face

turned my heart from flesh to stone

then casually left me all..........alone confused and chilled to the bone.


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    Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

    you invaded my personal space

    crystal eyes that shone in my face

    turned my heart from flesh to stone

    then casually left me all..........alone confused and chilled to the bone.

    Great words and I look forward to many more.

    Eddy.

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    Rachael C. 5 years ago from That little rambunctious spot in the back of your mind :)

    Great poem, Mark... its point hits home; good job :)

    Voted up, awesome, and beautiful... --Rachael

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    Mark Hodges 5 years ago from Birmingham UK

    Thankyou this rhyme in this current series is one of number I'm shortly publishing on hubpages. (they are not personal circumstances they are imagined and portray'd in my own interpretation)

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    Cathy 5 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

    Aside from a message which you have achieved with this piece, I liked the rhythm and the rhyming. Thanks.

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    Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

    " She will play that game again and again

    Enjoys it, She, when she gives men pain

    Men who are humble, loving and just

    Fall prey to such lasses who are a disgust

    They break our heart and find a new one

    Break it again... and have more fun

    Romp them on is what is needed

    Don't lose yourself, request pleaded

    For you are one honorable soul

    There's one for you, who is your whole!!"

    Beautiful words of love and pain my friend!

    :)

    Rahul