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Frozen Flower

Updated on July 12, 2012


As I wiped away... the snowy ground

a frozen flower was ....what I found

A cold, cold heart... as it lay there

barely breathing...... the frozen air


I picked you up... off your knee's

Your lips I kissed. and then you breathed.

A certain color..... was shown to be

of the kind.... from the deep blue sea.


Now my heart... it shines

like the sun

for my flower.. a love

has come

The cold was melted...

into dew

My love and warmth..... are all for you.



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      cleaner3 19 months ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for commenting manatita44

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      manatita44 19 months ago from london

      Truly exquisite! Nice colours too, my Friend.

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      fanatical fan 2 years ago

      wonderful words on the frozen aspects of flowers. some flowers thaw out and bloom again

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      cleaner3 2 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you .. rdsparrowwriter

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      rdsparrowriter 2 years ago

      Wow! Micheal simply beautiful :)

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      cleaner3 2 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you.. peachpurple...for the comment.. glad you like my writes..

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      peachy 2 years ago from Home Sweet Home

      beautiful poem, i have never seen a frozen flower, you sure are good at poetry

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      kathryn1000 4 years ago from London

      Thanks,Michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Kathryn .. love your last poems .. keep it up ..my dear

      Michael

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      kathryn1000 4 years ago from London

      Really beautiful one here,Michael.Good imagination.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you mycee, you are so kind.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      lovely metaphor used and what a genius title

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the visit and the comment. i hope to read more of your work also . once again thank You for the follow.

      Michael

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      Gary R. Smith 4 years ago from the Head to the Heart

      So much can be said in few words and metaphor. It is a lovely poem.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you, blondey !

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      Lovely poem, thanks for your comments...have a great Sunday

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      spy, thank you for the visit and the comments, my lovely poetess.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      michael..such a beautiful poem!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie, ...you .... a cold hearted woman... Never.!

      Anytime you are feeling cold, come to me your heart I will hold

      I will warm your soul and give to you

      some poetry that will remove your blues

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Ah, that warmed my cold, cold heart!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raci, and I also have missed you on my hubs .

      thank you for the comments

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i miss reading your poems Michael...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddwen, for your kind comments.

      glad to see you on my pages again.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful and here's to so many more.

      Eddy.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      always welcome Michael.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you spy, your comments inspire me.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      your last lines really rocks for an ending! love the photos too!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @k, thanks for the visit. well I do have a gift of gab with the women. but it,s just getting the conversation started that is hard.

      @thank you Max.

      @Katrine, thanks Katrine ,you know me too good.

      @bluebird. thank you for the comments.

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      bluebird 5 years ago

      This is so lovely that way you weave nature into love - just beautiful. My favorite of yours by far. Thanks for sharing Michael, keep up the great stuff!

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      KatrineDM 5 years ago

      So sweet, love can melt any ice..you've said it so nice..

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, so touching and beautiful! It is so tender and charming, amazing!

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      oh, Michael..i love the passion and romance borne deep in your soul...it shines, my friend..women must absolutely adore you, yes? lol

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @christen, thank you for your comment. glad to make you happy

      @teaches, thanks for the kind comments. love unfreezes every thing

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Sweet words and how romantic! Love how the warmth of love unfreezes the flower. Also, great photo adds - beautiful!

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      A beautiful poem I really enjoyed it :)

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      Patty Kenyon 5 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Beautiful Poem!!!