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I Give Up

Updated on February 27, 2017

I've stopped wandering what i can be

and what future holds for me

because now i have given up on me

and given up on my faiths and dreams


Stab my heart, try hurting me more

but no reaction you shall see

cause i am a dead flower

so no longer i feel


Every lonely night i lay tired

but in my brain thoughts still on race

i doubt if any worse i ought to face

because i shall dry after this night fades

I give up, there is nothing that i am to hold onto

It was only hope that kept me going

now no more pain and cries because here I go

"to live happily ever after alone" ; soul

It Isn't Wrong to Give up :(:

What do you think about giving up ?

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      Sudiksha 

      17 months ago from Nepal

      Jodah your words are precious. Thank you

      Paula, i am so glad you went through this poem. Everyone in life must have felt this and all i wanted was to bring it into words.Suiciding isn't good indeed. Thank you!

      Gypsy rose lee, thank you for the suggestion it truly means a lot . :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      17 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      The emotions here are strong. It is important to always remember that giving up won't come to any good. I say go by never say never. Giving up means giving up on a life that was meant for living.

      Some friendly reminders in the first verse change wandering to wondering. The future in the same verse.

      Every lonely night i lay tired

      but in my brain thoughts still race on

      i doubt if any worse i ought to face

      because i shall die or be gone after this night fades

      I give up, there is nothing that I can hold onto

      It was only hope that kept me going

      now no more pain and cries because here I go

      "to live happily ever after alone" ; soul

      You must think positively and you have offered your most emotional poem too much negativity.

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      Paula 

      17 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      It's clear you are very talented.....but this is so dark. Writing of suicide in any way leaves me sad and uncomfortable.

      Absolutely nothing in our life can ever be so desperately tragic that we cannot rise above in time. I wish you peace, hope & comfort. Paula

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      John Hansen 

      17 months ago from Queensland Australia

      This poem is sad but well conveyed. Don't give up, just change your focus.

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