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Girl Who Loved To Cry (poem)

Updated on July 17, 2012

I never met girl who so loved to cry

When happy she’d cry she’d cry feeling sad

Severe were the tears at times she got mad

She even would cry without knowing why

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And each cut and sprain was met with a tear

A couple in love brought reason to weep

For baby she’d cry oh look it’s asleep

A hint of goodbye meant crying was near

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Some fond memory brought moments to sob

She sobbed in the sun she sobbed in the rain

She sobbed for the people starving in Spain

For every season her tears met the job

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This crying you ask why mind didn’t whirl

Reread the first line I never met girl

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      A beautiful poem..crying is beautiful and healing..

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Once again, so very beautiful. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Beautiful Mhatter, just beautiful. You are so talented! Voted Awesome!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Excellent my friend, and the choice of song was spot on!

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      flashmakeit 4 years ago from usa

      Very emotional poem! It almost made me cry.

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      cry cry cry baby cry,

      or, just for experienced try!

      awesome !

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      Rina Pinto 4 years ago from Dubai - UAE

      I was moved by the Line " She sobbed for the people starving in Spain" my heart goes out for people who starve all over the world, while we who has been favored or Blessed with Provision of Food, we waste or eat like gluttons. We never dare to think of them that starve for food to death. We say beautiful words for the Starving & dying but who really cares from their heart and do a Beautiful thing of sending them food or money or the best going to that country and its people that are starving. People give people who already have, they never one a bit hesitate to throw the food in the thrash.

      Excellent Poem from your heart. God Bless you dear!

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      LikaMarie 4 years ago

      Love the poem. Here is another video, though not as good as the one you posted.

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8_FVAEYRM5I

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Ooooo...tricky one, M! Me gusta!

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      KDuBarry03 4 years ago

      It was so beautiful throughout the whole piece...until the final line. Great comical twist, Mhatter! Loved this poem :)

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Excellent Job and I loved how you ended it with a funny twist!!

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Once again a beautiful poem. Voted up!

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Ha Ha - Very sneaky and I did have to go back and reread the first line. You got me.

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      M, great poem and great song - I've always loved Dinah - remember the duet she sang with Brook Benton (the name of the song escapes me at the moment, but I loved it). Voted up!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      I'm glad you got the tie and twist

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Well I had to go back and read the first line again. I like your style of writing..Cool.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I think we have met people like her at one time or another.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Your poem was most unusual and the image of the lady sobbing her heart out was an excellent choice! I love the song; remember it well. I was brought up with this kind of music; Nat King Cole, Bing Crosby, Mat Monroe, Shirley Bassey etc. Great artists, who had real talent!

      Just one question, how many tissues does this lady go through in a month?

      Jan

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      Keep up the good work. WHOA!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      No wonder there are sayings like cry me a river and I bet this girl could. Liked this.

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Very nice! Liked the ending and the song too.

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