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Goodbye Sullen Sky

Updated on June 24, 2015
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

Cold winter’s grip faltering

No longer is altering


Goodbye sullen sky, birds hello

The barren branches green leaves grow


In a light breeze, now they start to sway

Gracefully, on the grass shadow play


River deep never fails bubbling new tales

Near the secret wood cabin made of nails



Now build under the ledge warm nests to settle in

And not fear a strong storm with its lightning

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    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      2 years ago from Morocco

      sujaya venkatesh

      Thanks so much for the comment.

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      sujaya venkatesh 

      3 years ago

      a beautiful poem

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      Missy Smith,

      Oh how sweet she is and I am glad you took her advice!I will check your page too.

      hugs and blessings

      Tijani

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      RobinGrosswirth23 ,

      Thanks so much for checking my poetry.I appreciate that so much.

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      Missy Smith 

      3 years ago from Florida

      Lovely poem Tijani, I was recommended by Faith Reaper to check your poetry out, and I'm glad I took her advice. Very Beautiful!

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      Robin Grosswirth 

      3 years ago from New York

      River deep never fails bubbling new tales

      Love the bubbling new tales.. I can almost hear this imagery at play.

      Sweet

      On to read more, voted up.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      annart ,

      Me too,I like spring so much.It really refreshes my soul

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      Ann Carr 

      3 years ago from SW England

      I love the Spring when the skies start to clear and the warmer weather comes. It brings such hope and new awakenings. Lovely poem.

      Ann

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      You re welcome and I am glad to hear that you are fine.You re right ,one should live his own life and not to worry much ..everything will work out for the best in the end.

      Blessings

      Tijani

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      Faith Reaper 

      3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Dear Tijani,

      I am fine here and after today I have my perspective on life back where it should be for I spent half the day at the Cancer Center then had to have a CT Scan to make sure the blood clots in my lungs did not return. Anyway, what I have learned after being healed of breast cancer, is to not sweat the little stuff and get so worried about the stuff in this life that really does not have an eternal impact.

      Thank you for asking. I pray you are well there too.

      Blessings always

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      Kamalesh050,

      Thanks for the comment and the vote.

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      Hi dear Faith,

      Thanks so much for the comment.I hope you are doing fine there.

      Blessings

      Tijani

    • James-wolve profile imageAUTHOR

      Tijani Achamlal 

      3 years ago from Morocco

      oh Frank,you are always the first one who commented on my stuff.Thanks so much.

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      Kamalesh050 

      3 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      What a lovely poem! Well done. Voted Up/Beautiful!

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Faith Reaper 

      3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Dear Tijani,

      This is superb and beautifully written.

      Peace and blessings

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      Frank Atanacio 

      3 years ago from Shelton

      as always very well written you are a poet

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