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Haiku 5-7-5 —Four Thoughts To Start The Day

Updated on July 15, 2012
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the scent of flowers

prevails in the morning air

nature sings softly



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to find happiness

open windows of the mind

let your dreams enter


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the sun still shines

behind all lingering gloom

ready to bring cheer






beginning today

reflect on gain— not what’s lost

feel life around you





© Don Fiduccia 2012


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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Thank you, raciniwa!

      DF

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      splendid poetry Don...

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Thanks Frank! Have a good day!

      DF

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      yeah love these little haiku.s great job the second one is my fav :)

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Cathleena,

      It's nice to meet you also. Thanks for reading and commenting.

      DF

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      Cathleena Beams 5 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Beautiful - Filled with inspiring words and photos that match up so well!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Rajan— Thanks so much for your comment and vote.!

      DF

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 5 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      DF, these are awesome haikus. I especially liked the thought in the last one. We'd rather think about what we have rather than what we lost. Life would be so much easier to live this way.

      Excellent, my friend.

      Voted up and awesome.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      b.Malin,

      Thank you for reading and commenting.

      DF

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Hi DFiduccia, Such Beauty to read in these Lovely Haiku Poems...Such short Sweet Messages...and the photos are Wonderful too!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      nell,

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Loved your haiku's, I just can't get the hang of them, or if I do they sound stupid! lol! wonderful pictures too, nell

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      beautiful Haiku poems.. Nice to meet you. the pictures are beautiful too.

      voted up and awesome and beautiful

      Debbie

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      Susan Haze 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

      Love them. They each have their own special meaning. The pictures are terrific. Up and awesome.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      DDE,

      Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

      DF

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      Devika Primić 5 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      That is such a lovely background and so beautifully expressed

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      bMalin,

      Thank you for the vote and kind comments.

      DF

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      How very Uplifting a read DiFiduccia. Along with the Beautiful Pictures I voted this one UP & Beautiful!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Vinaya,

      Thanks so much for your comment.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      You have strictly maintained the rules of haiku, very few people can do this. Your haikus are beautiful. I also loved your picture selection.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Born2care2001,

      It’s great to hear from you. Thanks for the upbeat comment, vote , and share.

      Take care my friend—DF

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      Rev Bruce S Noll HMN 5 years ago from Asheville NC

      Don, this is marvelous! So rich, so vivid and the photo's were a wonderful asset to the piece. Moved me off center and promoted the kind of clarity that helps one see all the importance of living!

      Worth repeating!

      "to find happiness

      open windows of the mind

      let your dreams enter"

      and sharing!!!

      Think I will.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Thank you, teaches!

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Like your expression to open the windows of the mind -- yes, it's the way to start every day! Great poetry and has me smiling!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Joan,

      Thanks for stopping by,commenting, and voting.

      DF

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      Joan Veronica Robertson 5 years ago from Concepcion, Chile

      Loved it! Voted up, awesome, beautiful and interesting!

      The poems and the photos are just right! Thanks for sharing.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      moonlake,

      Thanks for reading my haiku and voting.

      DF

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      moonlake 5 years ago from America

      Loved your haikus. Picture go just right with each one. Voted up

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Rebecca—Thank you. I appreciate your comment and vote.

      Mhatter99—Thanks for dropping by and commenting.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      good work. congratulations!

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      What beautiful verse, and you matched the photos up so nicely. Voted awesome and beautiful!

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      rajan,

      I appreciate your comment and vote. Thank you!

      DF

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 5 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Beautiful haikus DF. So true!

      Voted up, beautiful.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Thanks x. Don't worry about the share.

      DF

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Love those inside jokes too! Share button seems to be missing again though...

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      Very nice haiku with beautiful thoughts! I have to say, of the four;

      to find happiness

      open windows of the mind

      let your dreams enter

      is certainly my favorite! This could be a creedo to live by. I say again, these were great and beautiful haiku.

      Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Shared with my followers.

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      DFiduccia 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Thanks , Jim—you're a Saint.

      DF

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Excellent haiku my friend! These are beautiful and inspirational too.

      Voting up & shared too.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poem to read this Sunday.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.