Haiku 5-7-5 —Four Thoughts To Start The Day
the scent of flowers
prevails in the morning air
nature sings softly
to find happiness
open windows of the mind
let your dreams enter
the sun still shines
behind all lingering gloom
ready to bring cheer
beginning today
reflect on gain— not what’s lost
feel life around you
© Don Fiduccia 2012
Comments
AUTHORThank you, raciniwa!
DF
splendid poetry Don...
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Thanks Frank! Have a good day!
DF
yeah love these little haiku.s great job the second one is my fav :)
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Cathleena,
It's nice to meet you also. Thanks for reading and commenting.
DF
Beautiful - Filled with inspiring words and photos that match up so well!
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Rajan— Thanks so much for your comment and vote.!
DF
DF, these are awesome haikus. I especially liked the thought in the last one. We'd rather think about what we have rather than what we lost. Life would be so much easier to live this way.
Excellent, my friend.
Voted up and awesome.
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b.Malin,
Thank you for reading and commenting.
DF
Hi DFiduccia, Such Beauty to read in these Lovely Haiku Poems...Such short Sweet Messages...and the photos are Wonderful too!
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nell,
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Loved your haiku's, I just can't get the hang of them, or if I do they sound stupid! lol! wonderful pictures too, nell
beautiful Haiku poems.. Nice to meet you. the pictures are beautiful too.
voted up and awesome and beautiful
Debbie
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Love them. They each have their own special meaning. The pictures are terrific. Up and awesome.
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DDE,
Thanks for stopping by and commenting!
DF
That is such a lovely background and so beautifully expressed
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bMalin,
Thank you for the vote and kind comments.
DF
How very Uplifting a read DiFiduccia. Along with the Beautiful Pictures I voted this one UP & Beautiful!
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Vinaya,
Thanks so much for your comment.
You have strictly maintained the rules of haiku, very few people can do this. Your haikus are beautiful. I also loved your picture selection.
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Born2care2001,
It’s great to hear from you. Thanks for the upbeat comment, vote , and share.
Take care my friend—DF
Don, this is marvelous! So rich, so vivid and the photo's were a wonderful asset to the piece. Moved me off center and promoted the kind of clarity that helps one see all the importance of living!
Worth repeating!
"to find happiness
open windows of the mind
let your dreams enter"
and sharing!!!
Think I will.
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Thank you, teaches!
Like your expression to open the windows of the mind -- yes, it's the way to start every day! Great poetry and has me smiling!
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Joan,
Thanks for stopping by,commenting, and voting.
DF
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Loved it! Voted up, awesome, beautiful and interesting!
The poems and the photos are just right! Thanks for sharing.
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moonlake,
Thanks for reading my haiku and voting.
DF
Loved your haikus. Picture go just right with each one. Voted up
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Rebecca—Thank you. I appreciate your comment and vote.
Mhatter99—Thanks for dropping by and commenting.
good work. congratulations!
What beautiful verse, and you matched the photos up so nicely. Voted awesome and beautiful!
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rajan,
I appreciate your comment and vote. Thank you!
DF
Beautiful haikus DF. So true!
Voted up, beautiful.
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Thanks x. Don't worry about the share.
DF
Love those inside jokes too! Share button seems to be missing again though...
Very nice haiku with beautiful thoughts! I have to say, of the four;
to find happiness
open windows of the mind
let your dreams enter
is certainly my favorite! This could be a creedo to live by. I say again, these were great and beautiful haiku.
Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Shared with my followers.
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Thanks , Jim—you're a Saint.
DF
Excellent haiku my friend! These are beautiful and inspirational too.
Voting up & shared too.
Great poem to read this Sunday.
Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.
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