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Haiku Haiku

Updated on September 18, 2012
seasons all to come
seasons all to come
seasons to all go
seasons to all go

Seasonal



Change in season, now,

from warm to cooling breezes,

change in me somehow.





Seasons to and fro,

A child's time moves on, so slow,

Where does our time go?


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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thanks so much Darryl, glad you read my work and to get your responses.

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      Darrylmdavis 5 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      This was a really smooth Haiku...really enjoyed it :-)

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thanks for your nice compliment,ignugent17.

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      ignugent17 5 years ago

      The words are true. Voted up and interesting!

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Much thanks to you,Bong. You have to think miles ahead in order to write a message in so few words.

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      Jobb Gosamo 5 years ago from Philippines

      Truly, seasons change, we change and time marches on. Beautiful words

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Thanks again teaches, time is fleeting and seems more to adults than kids. I remember my life as a child in being like twice as long as when I got older, especially in my later years.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Gotta catch those important moments as they come- time moves too quickly and you can't rewind it. Lovely poem and truth abounds within!

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Hello Bill, yep, time is getting short, we've got to all make the most of what we have left. thanks for stopping by.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Where, indeed, does our time go? It's getting shorter and shorter my friend. Lovely haikus.