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Happenstance - A Love Poem
At a Glance
(This is a poem inspired by the novel "Message in a Bottle" by Nicholas Sparks. this was published in my blog, and was denied by HP so i need to revise the original content. I was really smitten by the main characters of the story, that I immediately wrote the poem "At a Glance.")
Your eyes are lingering
And creates a deep yearning
I want to uncover what’s within
I want to probe what’s hidden
The remoteness of that stare
I’ve been needing to bare
I can’t even repudiate
It seems not to abate
The riptide gradually subside
And slowly drifts by the seaside
I have a hard time to fasten
This ill feeling that’s contained
My desire is to unleash
All the looming wretchedness
I want us to start a fresh
And free you from neediness
Since the first time I saw you
A spark consumes my ego
Just bear in mind that Happenstance
Is caught in this Parlance…
Message in a Bottle
Comments
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hello poet83... thank you for leaving a wonderful comment and for taking the time to read...have a great day...
Excellent poem! There is a very poignant emotional theme here and I can surely relate to it. The pictures are awesome too! Thanks for sharing!
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a smile goes out to you...and me too...
you're welcome and you too!
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thank you Justin...have a great day...
Nice job, Racini
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oh, a double pleasure for me Manoj...being lovely and beautiful is force to be reckoned with...thank you for visiting and the wonderful comment...it certainly makes my day...
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thank you Phoebe for the vote of confidence...now, I'm contemplating of pursuing it with God's help...
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as intense as the feeling Cloud...thank you for taking the time to read my hub...have a great day!!!
Raci, a poem as beautiful and lovely as you. Who is the object of desire here, the desire itself seems to come out and ask this. Lovely,
MAKUSR
You definitely should look into it. Your work is amazing!
Nice one Raciniwa, I like the word play here, cool stuff indeed. Tough words to tackle yet it works beautifully, voted up!
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hello Phoebe....thank you for the generous comments...until now the thought has not come to mind...but who would not be thrilled to have a book published?it would be a dream come true...hopefully a guardian angel would touch the heart of a publisher...
I can't begin to tell you how jealous I am of your poetic talent! My own poems look like I had shaken up a jar of random words, but yours is sheer perfection! Will you have a book of poems published?
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yes, ahorseback...for I believe that love can be felt in an instant and can be expressed right away...thank you for the comforting words...I really need it...
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thank you Quiz2012 for visiting my hub...and for the welcoming words...it's quite a relief...
Raciniwa , You have touched upon two things I love , Enya and Messege in a bottle!....awesome job girl. I often wonder why poetry is so easy for some [like you] and others like me.........:-}
Deep poem. I like the images which come up upon reading the words.
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Hello always exploring...I haven't seen the movie either...but I have read the novel...it's a beautiful story that will surely move our hearts...and wish to have that one true Love...
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Hello rosemay, the novel is a must read...it leads us to a different perspective of love...and you'll eventually love Garrett for he writes beautifully...
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thank you Silent hurricane for the amiable comment too...Take care!!!
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Yes, Vinaya...they could have started afresh, yet it didn't happen...I am still haunted by its ending...thank you Vinaya for the thoughtful comments...
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Thank you Shim for that delightful comment...maybe we all do love Romance and the Happy ever after...but in the novel Nicholas takes us to a different ending...Have a blessed day too!!!
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oh, thank you Senoritaa...yeah, the original title was At a Glance for that's the theme of the novel...loving in an instant...maybe that's the quality of the heart...it can, if we'll only listen to it...
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yeah, Frank...maybe i'm a hopeless romantic...thank you for your presence...
This is a very beautiful love poem. I love the music. I must see that movie! Thank you..
I haven't read the book but your poem is so beautiful. So romantic and I loved the music. Wonderful
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Beautiful. Just beautiful.
I have not read the book but I think you have executed your thoughts wonderfully. My favorite lines are:
My desire is to unleash
All the looming wretchedness
I want us to start a fresh
Beautiful! Hope is one beautiful thing and romance is another one of those things dreams are made of... Love it. Have blessed day!
Oh wow! Simply wow! Though I haven't read the novel, but the poem you wrote is so deep even for a first glance!
romantic stand.. yeah up and beautiful Raci :)
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