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Haunted Zoo and the Silverback Gorilla

Updated on May 30, 2017
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Short stories are at the heart of why Phyllis loves to write. Her father left her a legacy of the art of storytelling.

Silverback Gorilla

Silver Back Gorilla
Silver Back Gorilla | Source

Maxim and Carl

The old silverback watched closely as the man approached. It was darker than usual on this moonless night, but the 40 year old gorilla still had good vision and could see the dark figure emerging from the stand of trees. He waited patiently.

"Well, Maxim," Carl the security guard spoke through the speaker to the huge gorilla. "So far all is quiet tonight and you look relaxed. Moon is obscured by those heavy clouds," he looked up at the ominous sky. "Hope it remains quiet, I ain't up to no spooks tonight, I have had enough of zoo haunting. What do you think it is that scares the animals?" Maxim just stared at Carl, not moving a muscle. He hated humans. He had been locked up in this cage since he was barely a year old because humans killed his mother and captured him. The memories still lingered in his mind even though he was so young when taken from his wild habitat. He was extremely intelligent and had a remarkable memory.

"You know, Maxim," Carl removed his hat and scratched his head. "One of these nights it wouldn't surprise me if you were to answer, but, you just sit there looking like you are deep in thought. I would love to know what's on your mind. If ever you want to talk, I'm here for ya, big buddy. Wish I could take you back to where you were born. It's a shame you spend your life here in a compound. " He put his hat back on, saluted Maxim and continued on his patrol. Maxim watched Carl leave then saluted him, which he had never done before.

Quiet of the Night

Carl used to love working the night shift at the zoo. It was always so quiet and the grounds were beautiful. It was not a large zoo, but it drew in a lot of visitors because of Maxim and the big cats.

The sheer size and strength of the silverback fascinated people and they loved the thrill of fear when Maxim had enough of people staring at him, mocking him and trying to get a reaction. That's when Maxim would lose his temper and start throwing things around and rushing at the bars to try and pull them apart, swaying his huge body back and forth and screaming.

Carl had worked a few day shifts when extra guards were needed and it saddened him to see people taunting Maxim to get him riled up. Carl liked it much better when he could stop and talk to Maxim in the quiet of the night.

But, lately things were not always quiet and peaceful at night. Something weird was going on. Several times over the last few months there were disturbances that startled all the animals and sent them into rage. On those nights Carl had to call backup security or the police to find out what caused the chaos.

They were always surprised to find that the only quiet animal was Maxim, just sitting there listening to the cacophony. The other guards thought Maxim must have done something to cause the animals to go wild. Carl knew better, though, and argued with them when they accused the gorilla. Carl knew it was not Maxim. It was a real zoo haunting. The first time a disturbance happened he had seen a large dark figure standing near the big cats compound. Carl pulled his gun and shouted . "Freeze! Hands up!" The figure turned quickly towards Carl then vanished. A squirrel ran across the area.

Carl had felt the hair on his arms rise as he searched with gun and flashlight, but there was no sign of the figure. He didn't tell the other guards because he knew they would think him crazy. He had not seen the man or apparition, whatever it was, since, but the disturbances still occurred. No one ever found any sign of an intruder.

Sense of Danger

Carl had a feeling this night was not going to go so well. After he left Maxim's area he checked his gun, holster, two-way radio, flashlight and baton just for assurance he had all he needed, even though he knew he did. He had been working at the zoo for almost ten years and had never been this wary. He felt the need to be ready for danger.

At 2:00 AM Carl had just sat down outside the security office to have a sandwich and coffee when a huge owl swooped down from a tree and flew right over his head. He felt the wind from the large wings. It startled the heck out of him, but did not slow his response timing. He stood up, drew his gun and kept an aim on the bird in case it came back. He lost sight of it as it flew over a compound and swooped down behind it. "Lot of owls around here, but I never seen one that big," he whispered to himself, "and never been threatened by one either!"

With gun and flashlight ready, Carl ran around to the other side where he saw the owl swoop down. He searched the entire area and up in the trees and found nothing but a squirrel as it scampered under a bush. "Better stay in there little guy or that bird might swallow you whole." He was jumpy yet very alert the rest of his shift.

Owl in Flight
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Unsociable

Maxim was not in the mood to be watched or taunted by visitors the next day. He stayed behind the trees at the back of his compound. When one of the zoo keepers tried to entice him out by calling through the speaker Maxim flipped him off and turned his back to the crowd.

When Carl came on duty he was told Maxim was "unsociable today and ignored everyone". When Carl made his visit he saw Maxim standing up and holding onto the bars, looking like he was waiting for Carl. "What's up, Maxim? I was told you were not sociable today. Something bothering you?"

Maxim sat down and stretched out his long massive arms, waving them up and down. Carl was surprised, for usually Maxim just sat and stared at him. Maxim stood up again and looked up to the sky, then started waving his arms again. "You're trying to tell me something, aren't you?" Maxim stopped and grabbed the bars, swaying, then stretched his arms out again. "Big? You saw something big?" Maxim again grabbed the bars and swayed back and forth. "Yes? That means yes?" Maxim sat down and nodded his head. Carl waved his arms like Maxim did. "Bird? You saw that big owl last night?"

Maxim jumped up and down then knuckle walked over to his toys in a large box. He took out a puzzle game of shapes, then sat in front of Carl, picking up different shapes and laying them down. Carl was amazed that Maxim was trying to communicate. He watched as Maxim kept moving the shapes to different positions.

Shapeshifter

Carl was thinking deeply, trying to figure out what Maxim was doing and why. Maxim pounded on the floor and moved the shapes again. "Moving?" Maxim shook his head no. "Changing?" Maxim nodded yes. For some reason he could not fathom yet, Carl clearly understood what Maxim was trying to say. "Shapes? Changing? Changing shapes?"

Maxim stood up and repeated the swaying at the bars. He then picked up a broken branch from a tree and held it behind his rear end. He dropped the branch and stretched out his arms like the owl.

Carl crossed his arms and mumbled, "Big owl, tail? Squirrel? Changing shapes ... changing ... shapes." Suddenly it dawned on him. He remembered that dark figure that vanished and the large owl last night, then a squirrel appeared both times. "Shape changer, shapeshifter!" Maxim started running around on all fours and acted like a kid who was happy to be understood. "A shapeshifter? You think that figure, the owl, the squirrel are all the same thing? It is a shapeshifter? That's what this zoo haunting is all about?" Maxim almost went berserk when he knew Carl got it. "Puzzles the heck out of me how you understand my words and I understand you so well," Carl tipped his hat back, and rested his hand on his hips, staring at the silver back. Maxim stared back then tapped his head. Carl laughed. "Yes, we are smart. That's for sure."

Both of them felt a strong bond and Carl stayed long after his normal visit time, conversing with Maxim. "Well, I have to finish my rounds, but I will stop back by often tonight in case you need to talk more." Maxim stood up and patted his hip. "Yes, I'll keep my gun ready. Damn haunted zoo sometimes scares the hell outta me. Shape shifter! Lord help us!"

Panther
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Stalker

About an hour later Carl was heading back to see Maxim when all hell broke loose. Every animal and bird in the place went berserk. This time Carl did not hesitate to call for backup then he drew his gun. He could see Maxim trying to break the bars down. Looking all around Carl saw the motion-detector lights in the darkest parts of the zoo go off and on. Something was out there prowling back and forth.

Sensing a need for protection Carl ran over to stand close to Maxim, with his back to the cage, his gun and stance ready for whatever was coming. "Maxim, this is one time I wish you could break out of there," Carl whispered as chills made him shiver.

When the lights stopped flashing he knew whatever was out there was now closer. He heard a low growl and turned to his left just as a black panther leaped, knocking him down. His head hit the pavement hard and he knew his time had come. He felt the heavy weight of the animal on his chest, heard Maxim screaming in rage, then Carl passed out.

Salute Buddy

When Carl came to he was surrounded by paramedics, police officers and four security guards. "Carl, hey buddy, you okay?" The paramedic turned to the others. "He has a mild concussion, we'll take him in to ER and they'll get him fixed up in no time. He'll have to be monitored for at least 24 hours. That dead guy will be taken to the coroner. Good thing you guys got here in time and shot that man. His knife left a few long scratches on Carl's neck."

One of the police officers said, "We did not find any knife or other weapon, just Carl's gun. But I shot at the guy because I saw a long dagger or something wicked in his hand going for Carl's throat."

Carl managed to turn towards Maxim and salute. Maxim saluted back then stood at the bars swaying as he watched them take his buddy away.

Silver Back Gorilla
Silver Back Gorilla | Source

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 2 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Ann. Thank you so much for that very nice comment. Carl and Maxim are two of my favorite characters.Glad you enjoyed them.

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      Ann Carr 2 months ago from SW England

      A gripping story from start to finish, I was enthralled. It's amazing how intelligent these animals can be and that's a great rapport between Carl and Maxim.

      Well done!

      Ann

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Shyron, dear lady, hope all is well with you. So happy to see you, too. All is fine with me and I am loving life. I am so glad you like this article, I really enjoyed writing it. Many blessings and hugs to you dear friend. Thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

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      Shyron E Shenko 3 months ago from Texas

      Phyllis, I am so happy to see you. what a suspenseful tale.

      I truly hope you are well.

      Blessings and hugs my dear friend

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Peggy. It is good to hear from you. I am pleased you like the story.There is a future for Maxim and Carl, so we will read more about them (soon, I hope).Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Rasma. So glad you like the story. Maxim and Carl are a great duo - they have really grown on me as characters and there may be another story coming out about them - it is spinning around in my head. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate it.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Terrific story. Got me at the beginning and just lead me on. Maxim and Carl would make a great duo to protect people from criminals except for the fact that Maxim must remain in his cage.

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      Peggy Woods 3 months ago from Houston, Texas

      That is an interesting story! Nice that Carl and Maxim could communicate like that but sad that Maxim had to spend his days locked up like that instead of out in the wild.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Oh my gosh ! Hi Will. I am so pleased you like it. I like these characters so much I may write more about them some day. Thank you, Will - I so appreciate you.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Mary. It would be nice if they were all like Carl. So glad you like this story. I had great fun with the characters. Thank you so much. I appreciate it.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Zumal. Thank you so much. Pleased you like the story. I have gotten quite fond of Carl and Maxim. LOL I appreciate your visit and comment.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 months ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Hi Mary.That would be nice if they were like Carl. So glad you like the story. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

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      Mary Wickison 3 months ago from Brazil

      Fantastic story.

      I would love to think that all night time zoo personnel spoke like Carl did to the animals.

      You've incorporated shapeshifters into and interesting scene.

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      Zulma Burgos-Dudgeon 3 months ago from United Kingdom

      Fabulous story. I was hooked right from the start and couldn't wait to see how it ended. What a clever idea to have Maxim and Carl communicating. A human shapeshifter, great idea.

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      WillStarr 3 months ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Wow! What a super story! Well done and congratulations.