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He Said

Updated on September 16, 2015

by Amber Maccione

He is too young, they said

But I’m in love, I said

He is just using you, they said

But I’m in love, I said

You’ll wind up doing it alone, they said

But it’s our love child, I said

Don’t leave me, he said

You cheated, I said

How will I see my son, he said

Stop your foolishness, I said

I love you, he said

I love you too, I said


He is too young, they said

But I’m in love, I said

He is going to cheat again, they said

But I’m in love, I said

You will wind up broken, they said

But we’re a family, I said

I don’t want you, he said

But I need you, I said

Give me two years, he said

I’ll wait for you, I said

Let’s be a family again, he said

I love you, I said

Don’t believe him, they said

I trust him, I said

Once a cheater, always, they said

He has changed, I said

He will leave you again, they said

But I love him, I said

I found another, he said


We’re having a baby, he said


I’m going to marry her, he said


Goodbye, he said



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      Mary Craig 2 years ago from New York

      Isn't it sad that a cheater usually holds true to form? You've written this beautifully and so full of emotion and truth.

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Sad, but often so true, although many times the "he" doesn't marry the second one either.