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Heart in pieces
Broken
She puts on a smile,
to hide her pain.
Everything to lose,
nothing to gain.
No one knows what,
she is going through.
Frozen in time,
don't know what to do.
Shattered and broken,
from head to toe.
Can't decide if she
should stay or go.
Her heart is in pieces,
scattered on the ground.
Losing the love she
thought she found.
Her eyes now see,
all the lies.
Each breath she takes,
she slowly dies.
Darkness consumes her,
in depressing tides.
Her mind and her heart,
are on opposite sides.
Her nights are lonely,
and silently long.
Nothing feels right,
everything feels wrong.
She can't move forward,
with her heart left behind.
She stands still as her
tears make her blind.
She gave all that
was hers to give.
Without her heart,
how does she live?
Comments
Thank you. I wrote it from my experience. Blessings
A sad, but beautifully written poem. Well done.
- Author
Thank you. I feel the pain thats why I wrote it.
This one makes me sad.....I feel her pain and understand. Where is magic when we need it so desperately? Peace, Paula
- Author
Thank you genna e appreciate the comment.
Deeply sad poem, and very powerful.
- Author
Thank you all for the comments. I write what I feel and what I see. Thanks again.
Beautiful.
A poem of sadness
So well written
It shatters the brainwaves
Leaving the sadness
In bottomless holes
Where else could you lose a heart so effectively! Voted up.
Sad poem, but very well written. I enjoyed the rhyme.
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