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Heavens Dawn
I woke with a sharp pain
Was it just a dream
So with my eyes held tight
I longed for the place where we had been
Under sighing stars smiling
Blessing love that they had seen
As you looked into my eyes
Throughout our nocturnal embrace
While our aurora's shone like rainbows
Deep into outer space
But on my lips was your taste
I could still smell your hair
Then I knew I was in heaven
When I felt you lying there
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I don't mind waking up alone because I get to spread my body all over my queen size bed when I'm sleeping! I move to the right when the left gets warm and back again when the right gets warm. Tee hee!!
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Thanks Shauna, My words are my torture.......errrrrrrrrr ;)
I am starting to get bored of waking up alone too hahaha !!!
Never mind one day LOL ;)
Love Simba xxx
How beautiful and tender, Jon! This poem causes me to miss having a relationship with a man, although I don't know if I've ever had one who made me feel what your words speak. Someone will be a very lucky lady some day!
- Author
Thank you Gypsy Rose :):):)
Simba
Just wonderful and so romantic.Passing it on.
- Author
Thanks guys for you kind words, and Andrew this is the relationship I want !!
I got to find it yet :)
Simba
This is a beautiful read. I wish that everyone were able to have a relationship that creates these kind of feelings in their life. Keep creating.
Beautiful! Up and awesome!
Beautiful,I like it.To love and be loved is the most beautiful thing could happen to human being.I voted it up.
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