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Hello Gorgeous

Updated on January 17, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

Hello Gorgeous

You sweetly smile and say to me

As the sun beats on your face in the morning

You always know the right things to say

After years I still feel swept away

You make me feel sexy and vibrant

Beautiful and loved

Like a real woman should feel like everyday

The beauty that I hold dear for you

Keeps me entwined

The only thing that I can say

Back at you

Full of love

Hello handsome

How are you today


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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      @ Hi Cleaner thanx I need that!

      @ Always thank you for the kind words. :)

      @ Astra that has got to be one of the best compliments I've gotten. Thank you for the kind words! You also should be published!

      @ Deborah thank you very much. Always good to see you. :)

      @ Robwrite thank you for reading. Lucky girl you had.

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      Rob 6 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

      Very nice. It reminds me of my old girlfriend because I always greeted her with that line "hello gorgeous".

      Well done,


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      so full of love Hello handsome...How are you today

      so awesome and these lines..

      i voted up


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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      The Joi de Vivre is truly alive in these beautiful words. and they flow unperturbed and free... just as love should. This is just Beautiful, Caroline. :)

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      Ruby Jean Richert 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Nice Caroline, Lucky you two..Best Wishes...

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Hello Gorgeous, just in case any man that you have or ran into forgot to say this to you.

      If it was someone you passed he didn't say that because he was probably intimidated by your beauty, or just MESMERIZED. LOL

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Tiagoz, Gypsy, Mckbirdbks, Vincent, WD Curry, Sky, Ghaelach, & Stessily thank you for all of your support. It keeps me wanting to write. I hope this kind of love on everyone. Wouldn't it be nice if every day someone would say that to you? LOL.

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      stessily 6 years ago

      Caroline, Love those beautiful greetings: Hello gorgeous; hello handsome.

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Caroline Hello.

      A lovely poem.

      After many years together one tends to forget those little important words "I love you" or hello gorgeous, hello handsome.

      Take care.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      There you go i guess I should go ahead and say hello. Is that you in the picture?


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      WD Curry 111 6 years ago from Space Coast

      Is this a dream or is it really like that? When I say hello gorgeous, I get, "Is the coffee ready yet?"

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      Vincent Moore 6 years ago

      Lovers complementing each other daily will both go a long way in their relationship. We all want to hear those sweet words of affection. Nicely said and with meaning and depth.

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      mckbirdbks 6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Very smart man. Very smart woman. These was a nicely written message, full of wisdom.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up! Love those words so beautiful and meaningful.

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      tiagoz 6 years ago

      Hey Caroline, I see that you like poms and romantic stories so I want to envite you to go to my page to check my story out:

      I guarantee you will like it.

      By the way, great hubs you have, I like your content, Vote up on this you.

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      Caroline Marie 6 years ago

      Hi Fullerman thank you for your kind comments. I am glad you liked it.

      LOL Cleaner you're so funny. I wrote these a while ago. Just putting them on here today. Where is your next one? :)

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, you are sooo good, I can't keep up!

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      Ryan Fuller 6 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Great poem about the one you love. good choice in words. lovely and good flow. great work.