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Help! Can You Save Me From Myself, Please.?

Updated on November 5, 2012

When Darkness Falls

I sigh, and feel a weight on my chest,

A deep, painful sigh, causing pain in my breast.

AH! what IS a sigh? And why does it hurt?

My whole being is swimming with questions,

The light in my eyes has gone out............

The strength in my limbs.... disappeared.

Can you save me, my love?

from myself, can you save me?

I have no fight left,

to do it myself,

I need you so much.

I´m out of control,

My mind has been twisted.

Please save me from more..........

I am tired, and so weary,

please..... come and save me,

Before I give out,..

And I am no more.

Save me, my love, as only you can,

Soothe me with sayings of comfort.

remind me of how I can be....

Help me pick up the pieces of me,

Save me as only you can........... Please.!


Photo from Suzettenaples/fellow hubber
Photo from Suzettenaples/fellow hubber

My legs feel like lead,

My feet in cement,

My arms, I no

longer can lift.

It´s happened before,

So I know with your help

The cement , it can melt,

My legs can gain strength,

Again I can become ´´Me´´.

But only with help,

YOU are my helper,

Come , save me , my love , won´t you, please.?


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    Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

    Beautiful metaphorical summing up of how l felt when l wrote this.

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    DREAM ON 3 years ago

    This time I read your poem I feel like a boat that has been battered by the winds and the rain. Finally unable to take any more I spring a small leak that is unrepairable with a matter of hours I shall be one of many other boats that lie on the bottom of the sea.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

    Oh You are a gem., Dream On.

    Thank you so much for those words.

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    DREAM ON 3 years ago

    Another creative poem that captured all my feelings and tossed them in the water. As I go scrambling through picking up each one like wet clothes that are heavy and slowly sinking some how they manage to still float. I can't explain it but I enjoyed you stirring of all my deepest emotions.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    That was a wonderful comment. Thank you, rawpsy.

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    rawpsy 4 years ago

    Nice Poem Dim... I must say.. fantastically written with deep thinking...keep it up!!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi there Astra Nomik,

    I feel honoured to hear expressions such as you have left here in your comment, because you, to me are such a wonderful poet.

    Thank you with all my heart.

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    Cathy Nerujen 4 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

    I love poetry that can whisk me up and away to another state of mind and emotion. yes, I know the feeling in this poem so much. That sense of needing saving is so human in us all. Wonderfully written, Dim. It is so amazing when someone "picks us up" like that and restores our belief in our own self once more.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you sen sush23 for visiting my page and taking the time to comment.

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    Sushmita 5 years ago from Kolkata, India

    I am feeling almost the same way as your protagonist. At times probably we all will crave for the help from the loved one. Beautiful poem.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Thanks Movie Master.

    Always feels good to have a comment from you.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi singlmom...... No wonder I haven´t heard from you for a while,,!

    CONGATULATIONS.

    Blessings to you dear friend. You deserve some good times.

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    Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    Hi Dim, beautifully expressed, I felt the emotion - wonderful poem, voted up!

    Best wishes lesley

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    singlmomat52 5 years ago

    Hi Dim, I am good and all is well. I got engaged on May 19th, quite a pleasant surprise, and I said YES!!! No date set yet but very happy and have been for some time now. I miss my kids and grandkids but love my life here! I do hope that you are doing well! Blessings Dim!! xxxxxxx

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    D mckbirdbks.

    Thank you for such a lovely comment. It´s true. The 1st step to recovery from ANYTHING is accept the fact that we need help.

    Take care.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Feels great, runabstract. Nothing better than friendship and hugs

    Thanks so much for sending them. They landed in just the right place.

    Take care.

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    mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

    Your poetry shows your strength, courage and sheer will power. Knowing when to call for help is a big part of making it.

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    RunAbstract 5 years ago from USA

    I'm sending you friendship and hugs today dear Dim.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    hello siglmom,

    haven´t seen you for a while.

    I´m fine. What about you?. Hope all is well.

    Thanks for commening.

    Hugs, Dim xxxx

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    singlmomat52 5 years ago

    Hello Dim, you are so right so many of us have felt this way and I am hoping and praying that you are not and if you are I am praying for peace in your heart, strength in your spirit and love to cover you from head to toe! Beautiful hub from a beautiful heart. Take care Dim. Blessings!! xxxxxxx

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi shara63,

    A beautiful comment. I am s glad you liked the poem.

    So many of us have felt this way at times.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Dear cleaner3,

    I loved your comment. Thank you so much for takng the time ...

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    Farhat 5 years ago from Delhi

    what a pathway Dim, whirls & whirls of emotions.. from mind to minds.'.....Wonderfully transferred!

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    cleaner3 5 years ago

    Dim, I love your work. you are after my own heart with the way you show the expression from within, the self perspective of a woman.

    Love it,!!

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    Suzette Walker 5 years ago from Taos, NM

    Thank you very much!

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi Susettenaples.

    Yikes .. I am a thief without knowing it.

    Thank you for pointing it out, I have sent you a private message.

    I´m glad you liked the poem.

    I appreciate your comment.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Ah Well my pics of so much water must have amused you.,rcrumple.

    Thank you very much for the comment.

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    Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

    What a journey for the mind and emotions!

    For a moment, I was traveling back to 1979 when I foolishly believed I could swim across and back Monroe Reservoir in Bloomington, Indiana and the battle to stay afloat that ensued. Next, I was traveling into a land of emotion and helplessness seeking the comfort and strength of love.

    Great Job!

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    Suzette Walker 5 years ago from Taos, NM

    Dim: Love your poem! We have all needed to be saved at one time or another from ourselves. I know I have. So, I enjoyed reading this. I love the photos - especially the last one - I don't know if you know this or not - that is MY photo that I took in Naples, Florida. Where did you get it? I am taking it as a compliment that you used MY PHOTO with your poem. It is appropriate. Just, please give me credit - I would appreciate it.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    I´m glad someone was there for you.

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

    You have a good weekend too.

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    Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

    I definitely needed love to save me in 2006. I can so relate to this poem. Well done my friend and have a wonderful weekend.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

    Hi there, Cagsil,

    So nice to see you on my page. Thank you for your encouraging comment.

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    Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

    A very interesting poem Dim Flaxenwick. It definitely delivers on expression and feelings. Nicely written. :)