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Her Angel Wings: A short poem about her

Updated on May 21, 2013

2011 Charcoal Drawing

Inspiration

When I was sixteen a beautiful girl, a classmate, a friend passed away in an accident. This short poem was something I wrote, expressing an unfamiliar pain. I had never mourned for a friend and as I had found in most my troubled times, writing a little something can help soothe the soul.

Her Angel Wings

(A Poem)

This rainy day

fits my mood.

Sorrow fills me,

anger too.

With angel wings

& a devil's sting,

she escaped

life's petty things.

So free me too

from this burdened spell.

They praised her life.

Life is hell.

Send me comfort

in my war,

my wounded spirit

is much too sore.

My legs are weary,

my heads gone faint.

Deliver your legions.

Send your saints.


Quote:

"Has this world been so kind

that you should leave with regret?

There are better things ahead

than any we leave behind."

-C.S Lewis-

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    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Hey Thanks a lot!

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      alocsin 

      6 years ago from Orange County, CA

      Nicely done. Voting this Up and Beautiful.

    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Thanks for the comment Sue. I'm sorry to hear about that terrible news. What a tough thing to go through. Take care.

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      Sueswan 

      6 years ago

      A beautiful, wonderful and heartfelt tribute to your friend.

      I recently discovered that a childhood friend of mine died of cancer last year. It doesn't seem real.

      Voted up and away.

    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Hey thanks a lot Justin. I appreciate it.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      this is terrific, Brian. I'll be sharing this

    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Aw thank you so much loonies.

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      looniestlove 

      6 years ago from Davao City, Philippines

      very nice and beautiful poetry...I felt it while reading it...thank you fro sharing to us this very beautiful poem...

    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Thanks a lot Deborah.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      I love your sweet sad poetry.. this is so awesome and beautiful. I know how it feels to lose a friend.

      Blessings to you

      I voted way up

      Debbie

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      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      Thanks Ella. Yeah it sat on a scrappy piece of paper in my closet for years. Glad I could share it.

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      Ella Robinson 

      6 years ago

      This is really beautiful, i'm amazed you wrote this at 16.

    • LVidoni5 profile imageAUTHOR

      Brian Loewer 

      6 years ago from Portland, Oregon

      I'm glad you all liked it. Thanks to each one of you for taking the time to stop by, I appreciate it

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      The Stages Of ME 

      6 years ago

      Your friend is smiling :) such feeling real and raw ~ hoping you are comforted with peace soon

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      Crystar 

      6 years ago

      This is very nice Lvdoni5. Beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 

      6 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Wow. Can't think of anything to say that will really say it - but WOW, way to go!

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      shimmering Dawn 

      6 years ago

      So poignant! The pain is palpable!

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      Lissette 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      Your heart knows my heart........

      This piece mirrors my heart and is beautiful. Thank you.

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      Verlie Burroughs 

      6 years ago from Canada

      This is such a touching tribute to your friend LVidoni5, and says so much about you too. Regards, snakeslane

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