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Hiding In Moments (tanka)

Updated on June 19, 2013

Hiding in moments

Stories of another page

Never quite finished

A star floats in its heaven

So unsure of what it was


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      shanmarie 4 years ago

      Makes me think of literal stars in space and of human famous stars.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sounds like a nova to me. Great work.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This is just so lovely.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Great use of words and they are put together so well.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Loved it!

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      Dear Martin

      Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps

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      Patricia Scott 4 years ago from sunny Florida

      Dear Martin

      Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      So beautifully composed !

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Powerful and deep..Love it!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Amazing as always.Your style is trenchant and direct to the point.Voted up

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Another real thinker, Martin. I had to read it a few times. Nice!

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Great one.

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Very nice Martin.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Wow, this really sticks with me and makes me think; how you can say so much with so few words is truly amazing.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Up, awesome and beautiful. It speaks to me of how a poem emerges. Thank you for that, MHatter99.