Hiding In Moments (tanka)
Hiding in moments
Stories of another page
Never quite finished
A star floats in its heaven
So unsure of what it was
Comments
Up, awesome and beautiful. It speaks to me of how a poem emerges. Thank you for that, MHatter99.
Wow, this really sticks with me and makes me think; how you can say so much with so few words is truly amazing.
Very nice Martin.
Great one.
Another real thinker, Martin. I had to read it a few times. Nice!
Amazing as always.Your style is trenchant and direct to the point.Voted up
Powerful and deep..Love it!!
So beautifully composed !
Dear Martin
Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps
Dear Martin
Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps
Loved it!
Great use of words and they are put together so well.
This is just so lovely.
Sounds like a nova to me. Great work.
Makes me think of literal stars in space and of human famous stars.
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