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Hiding In Moments (tanka)
Hiding in moments
Stories of another page
Never quite finished
A star floats in its heaven
So unsure of what it was
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Makes me think of literal stars in space and of human famous stars.
Sounds like a nova to me. Great work.
This is just so lovely.
Great use of words and they are put together so well.
Loved it!
Dear Martin
Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps
Dear Martin
Each time I read your work I find words that captivate and cause me to ponder...Angels are on the way this evening...ps
So beautifully composed !
Powerful and deep..Love it!!
Amazing as always.Your style is trenchant and direct to the point.Voted up
Another real thinker, Martin. I had to read it a few times. Nice!
Great one.
Very nice Martin.
Wow, this really sticks with me and makes me think; how you can say so much with so few words is truly amazing.
Up, awesome and beautiful. It speaks to me of how a poem emerges. Thank you for that, MHatter99.
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