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Hinder me

Updated on April 2, 2010


Train of thought.

Don't hinder me with you rigid declaration of freedom

And rights

Strait and narrow the path you push me to find

Searching for light so I can see

Falling forward into reverse sliding in between love and hate, misfortune and luck

Deal me the next card a different kind of fate

My same identification with a different name

Hold me tightly now, too mold me into what I'm supposed to be

Bend me, fix me, glue me, screw me, and hold me into place

Forgive me now so you can find me

Search for me where I've been so you can lead me out of myself and into you..........


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    • Sunshiney31 profile image

      Sunshiney31 7 years ago

      Thank you for the compliments.....

    • TrixieGator profile image

      TrixieGator 7 years ago

      i reallyyy like this ..

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      MordechaiZoltan 7 years ago

      nice poem!

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      cosette 7 years ago

      very nice, and i like the image you included in the hub. i am not courageous enough to write poetry, so kudos to you. rating this definitely doesn't belong with a 49 beside it.

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      Very nice!

    • Moulik Mistry profile image

      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      Another good one from you, loved your poetics...