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Hymn-Filled Chamber

Updated on November 20, 2014
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

Empty shell

Reflects life gone,

Hymn-filled still

~Chamber of ghosts.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Maria Antonia ,

      Thanks so much for the comment.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Beautiful written. Jamie

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      Antoinette Lee Toscano 3 years ago from Raleigh, NC

      I love the line "hymn filled chamber". It made me look at conch shells anew, bravo.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks so much.

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      You're welcome. You too!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      annart ,

      Thanks so much for your lovely comments.Have a nice weekend

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      Ann Carr 3 years ago from SW England

      Lovely poem! I love listening to the sounds of the sea, ghosts, thoughts.....

      Great!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Not a Haiku just as you said a little poem ;)It doesn't respect 5-7-5

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      love the haikis? great little poem