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I Am Cut With You In My Arms

Updated on November 13, 2010

I Am Cut

 My music playing softly though only in tone for its lyrics are mentaly violent

I hear a breath catching cry my body goes on alert

but why

My music regains my attention and my bodys rhythm is commanded by it once agian

but again

The cry sounds shattering my comatose state

I rise my bare feet slide across the brick something telling me to produce them haltingly

The cry now the director of my thoughts

I reach she who is the singer of this angry song

Blazing drops of a blue hue seem to tear about shredding their surroundings

Tears fall from them as she continues to cry

My arms move towards her as if in slow motion but something in me begins to scream 

"You remember what happened! He Died! You Were A Coward! Shes Alive No Thanks To You! If You Touch Her Youll Break Her Like All The Memories Youve Shattered Before!"

Without anything other then standing in her presence I am shamed

I realize if I even hold this gem I would tarnish her

Some have called me a fighter, a loyal friend and yet I am helpless to comfort her to keep her flashing eyes from being hammered by tears

She is a fighter she reaches out to no one as all reach toward her

No words does she speak but that commanding cry brings me to my knees as every cut on my body screams

How I wish from this reality I could fly.


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      epigramman 5 years ago

      hello dear friend your masterpiece is safe - the group I am referring to is my Facebook group online and you have a direct link back here with your poem - I just need more people to see your great work - if you are feeling uncomfortable about this - just please let me know and I will delete it - just let me know - lake erie time 8:57am

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      poeticColor22 5 years ago from The Coast

      posted at an event???? o.o that means it could be stolen...

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ..this is perfection in poetic art my friend - you say you have been away - well please come back and write again - this took my breath away - like a cinematic scene in my mind courtesy of your powerful words - best writing in quite awhile that I've had the pleasure of reading here at the hub - it will be posted madly and gladly at my new FB music/cinema group LET'S JUST TALK MUSIC OR CINEMA - and you are invited to the show - we would love to have you there - it would be a honor and a thrill - my name is Colin Stewart at FB with the same profile picture - and sending you warm wishes and good energy at lake erie time 12:14am

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      We learn from our sadness an in time will share great times ahead.Thanx for sharing.

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      Mentalist acer 7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Courage often rise from the weakest moments to balance needed strength that comes from etherial places;)

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      K.A.E Grove 7 years ago from Australia

      so full of pain, this brought tears to my eyes ....