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Love Poem About Love and the Sea : I Am Just a Sand in the Ocean

Updated on September 17, 2013

I Am Just A Sand in The Ocean 

 

Words softly spoken

Scattered minds, blank walls

It is confusing, swirling

Needing to sleep and drift away

I am just a sand in the ocean

 

Mind in constant turmoil

Like a clock just ticking

Waiting in exasperation

Needing to rest and be still

I am just a sand in the ocean 

 

Rather keep on pacing

Confusion black wall

Mind in constant swirling

Unending confusion

I am just a sand in the ocean 

 

Of a world never ending

Mistakes, moving on

Life just fail to keep on

Sadness and happiness

I am just a sand in the ocean 

 

Never ending cycle

Will it ever stop

To kiss the moon goodbye

Or when the sun sets down

I am just a sand in the ocean 

 

Darkness all around

It is never ending time

It is consuming the energy

Until my life comes to an end

I am just a sand in the ocean 

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      manlypoetryman 7 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Way Great Poem, alexandriaruthk. Full of much deep thought...and a metaphor or two or three. I really liked it...it made my thoughts drift to a beach somewhere and made this poem a great read.

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      maven101 7 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Sand is love, the beach upon which the ocean of life crashes and rolls...some may be pulled away, but it is soon replenished with fresh sand ( love )....I liked this poem and the feelings of urgency I felt...I'm assuming English is a second language for you, and in that regard I think you have done very well in expressing yourself...

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      Hi Manlypoetryman, I am glad you like this one Thank you

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      Thank you maven101 English is my second language. Thank you

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Well the ralwus will now join you on the briny sand. I concur with Larry, maven.

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      Thank you Charlie, I appreciate you dropping by here,

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Welcome love

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      We are all like that, great way of expression...

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      thank you moulik!

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      George J Hardy 7 years ago from Southern New Jersey

      The insignificant human meets up with the rational person deciding on fate; nice approach.

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      Thank you George! you got it right Sir!

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      Shari 7 years ago from New York, NY

      And I am just a wave coming by to say hello . . .and to think all this time I had no idea you were not only pretty but you write pretty things ;)

      who loves ya!

      ME ;))))

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      hmmm, wave, welcome to my world again, I love yah friend, Maita

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      manlypoetryman 7 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Stopped in again...for a quick read. This poem is like a mini-vacation to a far-away beach somewhere. Somewhere where "I am just a sand in the ocean!" Your a great Poetess, Maita (And...I could use a vacation about now)!

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      alexandriaruthk 7 years ago from US

      thank you manly hehe, I miss the beach, hehe, it is still chilly in the am here,

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      Nayothara 6 years ago

      Oh my God, I love the way you write. Beautiful, Romantic,soft What can I say, I got to be your fan.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Great way of expression, voted beautiful.

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