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I Know What I Want

Updated on September 22, 2012

Two Comments To Go Please

I am in a hurry

I can't wait

Can you make that as fast as you can

There was a line and I impatiently waited my turn

I thought I would never get here

I thought I would come early but then again so did everyone else

I will take it to go

I have a big day ahead of me and this is my first stop

I have never said so many I's at one time

I am on a roll

Thanx again and I am off

To a world where somebody cared to say hello

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Gypsy Rose Lee Just a little fun humor to split up the day.Thanx so much for reading.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Short and sweet. Liked this.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      kj force What a wonderful witty answer you made me smile.Thanx so much.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      DREAM ON.. hopefully I will make it three.. one ..very original..two..describing society to a " T"...and three.. 15 I's..and only ONE little ole me...enjoyed..

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      shiningirisheyes I think wouldn't it nice to see two comments a day.Hearing from people all around the world.Then again we are so busy and want to rush rush.It is time to slow down and enjoy life.I love it I got two comments today and both are from you.Thanx so much for reading and sharing.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      This wonderfully written piece hold hints of my tendancies. Some I need to work on - like slowing down and enjoying the ride.

      Deep and awesome.