A Blissful Embrace (Annart's challenge)
Annart's Challenge
A Blissful Embrace
Please have a glance at the top of this hub where you'll find a beautiful painting. This painting is a sole property of a wonderful writer by the name of Annart. She, most kindly, has invited all to write something on this fantastic painting that shows a lonely guy staring at an ocean. Here is my response and I hope you'll relish it a bit.
Response to Ann's challenge
Only you can empathize with all, who can know better than you ?
Things take refuge in your arms, as kids sitting safe on dad's lap.
As a mother bears all thorns, her child blossoms like a rose,
I hear mother's love in your roar, only who can match your heart.
Insouciance indulged in my life, only a mother can swallow up,
Take me in your blissful arms, merge me into the dulcet waves.
Such an expanse you go far, see the ocean surging in my mind,
It took each bit, drank all potions, I brought along to show you all.
Waters you carry instill fear in all, pricks I bear can pierce the sky,
I want to feel your quiescence and show how I kept my patience.
Friend, we must come closer and share things that we faced,
Come near, stretch arms to me, take me in an huge embrace !
© Harish Mamgain
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Comments
- AUTHOR
I'm so glad you liked this poem. Jamie, you are such a wonderful poet ! it's my great pleasure to have you presence on my hubs. Thanks for reading and appreciating this poem.
"...Take me in a huge embrace!" What a great ending to this beautiful poetry. I will spend some time today reading and absorbing your well crafted poems. I hope you are well. Jamie
- AUTHOR
Chris, you rightly pointed out a mistake in a word. I have set it right. The word is refuge meaning shelter and not refuse. Thanks a lot for your guidance, my friend.
- AUTHOR
To be a part of some wonderful game is such a nice feeling. Bill, this was the second challenge for me, first being thrown by Frank Atanacio. I relished both. I always love your words on any of my hubs. Thanks for reading and commenting and very encouraging words.
Lovely work my friend. I agree with Ann..this is remarkable considering that English is your second language. Bravo!
Thank you. I'm so glad you rose to the challenge.
Ann
- AUTHOR
Never mind,Annart, I'm so pleased with your appearance on this hub. Your words are a big boost to me. I'm also delighted to see my link on your wonderful hub that attracted so many fantastic hubs. For me, it was an unforgettable and unique experience. Thank you very much. Wishing you all happiness and peace.(-:
Sorry to have taken so long to get round to reading this. It was worth the wait - lovely poem! As someone for whom English is a second language you have done such a wonderful job here, just as good as the other responses so you should be proud of yourself. I have added your link to my hub.
Thank you so much for taking up the challenge. I'm humbled by the magnificent response from everyone.
Ann
- AUTHOR
Jo, so nice of you to have revisited this hub. You have such a generous heart. I admire you as a wonderful poet. Thank you very much.Wishing you all happiness.
Still beautiful the second time around. In some ways, this is antithetical to my poem. Very well done.
- AUTHOR
When I wrote this response, I didn't expect to experience such a warm affection that wonderful guys like you gave to me. I also got to savor such wonderful responses all around. The Stages Of Me, thanks for your kind visit and appreciating this poem. Also thanks for follow but it would always be reciprocal. Wishing you all happiness and peace !
What is so exciting to me is meeting others through Ann's challenge and getting to read the amazing works and talents. So happy to have learned of you and been allowed into your poetic heart. Blessings to you :)
- AUTHOR
No problem, my friend. Thanks for your revisit, please.
Hi Harishprasad, sorry about the misunderstanding with the word. I don't usually pick on hubs. See you around in the hubs.
- AUTHOR
Chris, I saw your profile. You are such a prolific writer, my friend. I would love to go through your hubs. A word " refuse" used here means "shelter". Thanks for your visit and appreciating the poem.
- AUTHOR
Gypsey, I loved your presence here and am glad that you liked this poem. Thank you very much.
- AUTHOR
Jo, nice to have your visit. Thanks for reading and appreciating the poem.
- AUTHOR
Roldens , my friend, I'm so glad that this weed attracted you. Poetry is a charming damsel and I bet if you stare it with love and savor it's curves you'll be entangled for life ! You are such a fantastic writer, I'll surely go through what gem you have brought up for readers. Thanks for visit and appreciating this poem.
- AUTHOR
Audrey, appreciation from you is something special that I cherish. Loved your presence here. Thank you very much.
- AUTHOR
I'm so glad that you liked it. Devika, it was a sweet challenge and it was all fun to create a response. I just loved this wonderful game and also got an opportunity to read some very fantastic responses by wonderful pens. Thanks for your visit and vote up.
A sweet poem. I don't think I've comprehended it all yet, but I'll read it again. I noticed something in sentence two. Refuse = Refuge?? Just wondering. Going back to read again. Thanks for sharing.
Absolutely wonderful.
Beautifully done.
I really love that poem even though I am not a big fan of poem...It is the word that you use that I like...This is my latest love story or fiction: https://hubpages.com/literature/Our-Memory-Is-Eter...
Oh --nicely done!! I have been busy this last week and so just now catching up a bit!!
A beautiful write from you! I appreciate your talent! Voted up!
- AUTHOR
It is always pleasant to see your appearance on any of my hubs. ChitrangdaSharan , I love playing with words and this beautiful sport of expressing yourself after having seen a painting is just fun and I enjoyed it. Thanks for reading, appreciating, vote up and support, as always.
- AUTHOR
John, I was tempted to write something the moment I saw Ann's beautiful painting. I read her wonderful hub later on when I found out the link in one of the responses to the challenge. Though English is second language to me, I have all admiration for it for assimilating from so many sources, turning it into as one of the richest languages. I accepted the challenge just because of my love for the English language and to show that I'm also on the way of learning it in a proper way. Thanks for your support and constant encouragement.
- AUTHOR
Nithya, thanks for your visit and appreciating the poem. I love the presence of poet like you.
Nicely expressed poem, with beautiful pictures to compliment!
Thanks and voted up! Well done!
I'm glad you accepted Ann's challenge Harish. Wonderful poem to accompany the painting. Voted up.
A beautiful poem! Vote up.
- AUTHOR
Ruby, manatita, Faith, Mary, Kevin, Phyllis and Eric sir, I'm glad that all of you so kindly read this poem and appreciated it and presented such generous comments. Thank you very much. Wishing you all good and happiness.
Every now and then I find poetry that I can call mighty. This one has the force of love behind it in a very special way. I shall begin and end my day with hugs today. And in doing so think fondly of this poem.
Very lovely poem, harishprasad. It goes so well with the painting.
This was written in words which described the painting in a way I cannot describe. Very good Harish. I voted this up, shared, tweeted it.
Nicely done. A poem certainly worthy of the challenge.
Voted up and interesting.
Oh, what a beautiful response to Ann's challenge. Your poetry is always moving and excellent.
Up +++ tweeting, pinning and sharing
Blessings
A noble effort Bro. Much love.
I love the way you responded to Ann's challenge in a poetic fashion, simply beautiful!
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