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I am in Hell.

Updated on April 17, 2015

I am in Hell

What is Hell?

I do not know.

The demons are grabbing me,

They won't let go.

Am I Insane?

My mind is hallucinating.

Am I insane?

My body is aching,

I feel such pain.

Where am I going?

Where am I going?

Where have I been?

Am I going to Hell?

Lord, forgive me of my sins.

Why must I suffer?

Why must I suffer?

What have I done?

I give up on life,

Hell, has won.

Stuck in Hell

I am gone now.

Will you miss me?

Probably not.

I am stuck in hell,

and soon to be forgot.

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you always, Nell, Larry, Flourish and Sunshine for reading this hub. Yes it is very intense and deep. I feel at one time in one's life we all feel as though we are stuck in hell. Getting out gives us the ability to survive. Stay tuned for more deep dark poems.

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      Linda Bilyeu 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

      That is some place I wouldn't want to visit! Powerful poem!

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      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      Very intense poetry.

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      Larry Rankin 3 years ago from Oklahoma

      Some intense poetry.

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      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      Love this dark poem, yes hell is in our own minds, I hope! great take on Hell!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I agree. This is a dark piece. Sometimes our mind's can take us to the darker side of life, esp. in the winter months. Spring is almost here..YEA..

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you jhamann, Eric, Jodah, bigi1969 and Frank for your wonderful comments. I have tapped into my dark side of writing. There will be more to come. Stay tuned.

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      Lisa VanVorst 3 years ago from New Jersey

      Thank you Frank. Yes this time my writing is getting deep. Glad you enjoyed it.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      another poem that has crazy tripping over crazy.. Love it too :) voted awesome :)

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      John Marshall 3 years ago from glasgow

      Very descriptive and unsettling poem,fantastically worded.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wow Lisa, you are on a run. Another very descriptive poem. I hope you don't go there.

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      Eric Wayne Flynn 3 years ago from Providence, Rhode Island

      Interesting and honest account of one's inner turmoil tossing and turning and bubbling. Sacrifice and suffering are sadly part of the human experience.

      EWF

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      Very intense, uncomfortable poem. But then I imagine an accurate account of being in hell. Jamie

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