I can't feel the rain
Is it cold outside
Outside this heart of pain
Empty fear it haunts me
As I walk in the rain
No frightened of the thunder
That shakes the cold dark sky
It's the terror of my future
Without courage to try
To wake with a dry face
Pretending I don't care
Still sleeping on your side
Night wishing you were there
Do I just keep walking
Alone in the cold rain
Disguising tears upon my face
Washing away the shame
Sleep is for the happy
Searching solace is in vain
So I shall walk forever
As I can't feel the rain
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We guys are just not real good at dealing with a womans opposite poles !.....:-}
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You know it bro !! lol
Your words have power and I can feel their pain. Just remember that everything has a season and this too shall pass.
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Loveofnight,
that is a wonderful comment and thank you so much and yes you are so right :)
Simba
The pain is felt to one's core in your words written here. Very powerful. One must persevere through that pain and have that courage to keep trying, as if one does not at least try, then one may never know of that great joy that could be their's the very next morn. There is always hope for a new tomorrow, but there are such seasons we all go through no doubt.
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God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper
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Faithreaper ,
As always you speak such wise words of kindness and compassion which always make my spirits sore , thank you so much
Love Simba xx
so sad....so difficult. Great poem!
Emotional and powerful, you have great expression in your work:-))
How sad that the pure fresh water of rain is always blamed for salty tears! Surely hail would do a better job with better effect? Crying off into the sunset seems a complete travesty... why on earth do we allow such things to occur only on rainy days? There are some good bones in your poem... expressively.. have a good look at them and you will see what wonders a sunny day can do to heighten their effect dramatically... thanks for the opportunity to read your work.. PD
Voted up and awesome. This poem speaks volumes and the pain just comes right through. Really emotional.
Jon, kick off your shoes, lift your face and walk in the rain. Let it cleanse your tortured heart. Nature will purify you. Man (woman) will petrify your soul if you allow it. Take hold, say no and walk in the rain.
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