I can't feel the rain

Jon, kick off your shoes, lift your face and walk in the rain. Let it cleanse your tortured heart. Nature will purify you. Man (woman) will petrify your soul if you allow it. Take hold, say no and walk in the rain.

Voted up and awesome. This poem speaks volumes and the pain just comes right through. Really emotional.

How sad that the pure fresh water of rain is always blamed for salty tears! Surely hail would do a better job with better effect? Crying off into the sunset seems a complete travesty... why on earth do we allow such things to occur only on rainy days? There are some good bones in your poem... expressively.. have a good look at them and you will see what wonders a sunny day can do to heighten their effect dramatically... thanks for the opportunity to read your work.. PD

Emotional and powerful, you have great expression in your work:-))

so sad....so difficult. Great poem!

The pain is felt to one's core in your words written here. Very powerful. One must persevere through that pain and have that courage to keep trying, as if one does not at least try, then one may never know of that great joy that could be their's the very next morn. There is always hope for a new tomorrow, but there are such seasons we all go through no doubt.

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God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

Your words have power and I can feel their pain. Just remember that everything has a season and this too shall pass.