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I caught you catching me

Updated on November 15, 2012

I think that you've been searching
Started before it was called time
Talking to all earths souls
Hunting for for this one of mine

Two halves tumbling through life
Lost and unaware
Falling right beside them
Was the other always there

Somethings remain hidden
But this was meant to be
I was meant to catch you
As you were catching me

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Simba, you are awesome. Beautiful and powerful poetry. I'm sharing this and voting up!

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      A beautiful poem, very lovely.

      Voted up.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      ehealer thank you so much for you're wonderful comment this really has made me smile

      Michele , you're words really make it worth while thank you

      Love Simba xxx

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Beautiful and very dramatic! I love your play on words, and it was the title that drew me in.

      Very powerful no doubt.

      Voted Way Up.

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Thank you faith,

      This was in fact my first write with which the title came in my head before the piece lol

      love Simba xxx

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      Paula 4 years ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Simba when you pour your heart onto a page, it flows like magic and touches my heart. How beautifully you express your inner feelings and thoughts of love.....UP+++

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      fpherj48,

      Wow you're comment has taken my breath away :)

      Thank you so much

      Simba xxx

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      fpherj48,

      Wow you're comment has taken my breath away :)

      Thank you so much

      Simba xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Yeah, baby! That's what love is about! You don't seek, you get captured! Awesome, Jon! You've moving up and out of despair, my friend!

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Hey Shauna !!! was it alright then :)

      I am feeling like a free spirit again lol

      xxx

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      This is absolutely beautiful! I love the way youy expressed it! You nailed it! Up and awesome!

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Btrbell you're comment has made me smile thismorning thank you so much :)

      Simba xxx

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....is that your hair? I wish I had hair like yours and all of the hub girls would look at me differently instead of trying to keep this toupee of mine from slipping off - and you also a natural wonder at writing too - man oh man - great hair - great writer and a handsome dude too - you've got it all - and so nice to meet you - you have a beautiful poetic heart - and sending you warm wishes and good energy from lake erie time ontario canada 9:51pm

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      Hey Epigramman !!

      Thank you for your awesome comments , too flattering for sure but what a great comment to wake upto on the first morning this year where the world outside is painted white with frost, It is such a beautiful morning here in Bristol UK I have just made porridge for my daughter and soon we will be at the local swimming pool, were playing our favourite music.

      I have to say the hair went a couple of years back and I keep it cropped these days LOL , I have to confess I have just pooped in t check you out and considering what I see your comments hold some serious clout and I feel honoured by them , I really do !!!

      I have to go now my girl Savannah is giving me the come on DAD !!! look , so please feel my warm wishes and positive energy from my little cave in the winter from across the pond. 08.07am GMT

      Great to meet you !!!

      Simba

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Yes my friend - it's so nice to meet you and have a great day and evening too with your beautiful family and keep listening to great music as well.

      There are touches of frost in the mornings here as well but here in this part of Canada we are hanging onto late fall although November is definitely the gateway month to winter.

      Sending you warm wishes over my 2nd cup of coffee and listening to some nice baroque music at lake erie time 8:25am

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      Waheed Chuahdary 4 years ago from United States

      Great Simba i like your hubs by hearts thanks for sharing this voted up..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. Really nice way to say it when two who are meant to be together find each other. Love the catching part. Hope you and your lovely daughter have a great Thanksgiving. Passing this on.

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      Simba73 4 years ago from UK

      GRL thank you so much for your kind words and lovely comment watch the time line board I have an announcement to make

      Love Simba xxx

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      Lee Franczyk 4 years ago from Philadelphia, PA

      This title caught my eye and it was very nice. You write a lot like me. Thank you for the opportunity to read your work.

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