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I dreamed of stars

Updated on August 23, 2013


I dreamed of stars...

across universal sky,

where ocean sea's

met... with rocky lie

When shadows creep..

within foggy breeze

take me and leave me

there.... if you please

On moonlit night...

with stars so deep,

I was taken into

a wonderous land

and beautiful sleep

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      Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

      beautiful.

      I loved the atmosphere you created.

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      Robert A. Joseph 3 years ago

      Truth is, as wonderful as the photo is, your words created one as clear and radiant. Quite an impact is all I can say.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Dim.. your comments are appreciated...I love the stars

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you kind sir.. JPB..

      your comments are appreciated, also for the read.!

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      That is a beautiful sleep.

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      andrew savage 3 years ago from USA

      Very nice photograph.

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      Robert A. Joseph 3 years ago

      You're welcome, for sure, cleaner3, an excellent presentation, as it uses multi-media to punctuate the wonder of state of mind. Again, thought-provoking, perhaps, enjoyable, certainly. Please continue.

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      lovedoctor926 3 years ago

      You write such beautiful poetry. wonderful imagery.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      wetnosedogs.. thank you..for the visit and the comment

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Andrew .. for the visit.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Marlene, thank you for the kind comment .. liked your last post also .. you are a terrific writer.! I just noticed you were from my dreams ..how awesome is that ?

      Michael

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      Martin Kloess 3 years ago from San Francisco

      Wonderful mood here. thank you

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Hi Dearest Michael,

      That is exactly where I was last night in a wondrous land of beautiful sleep.

      What a beautiful poem as always. I am always in awe of the beauty you pen to page.

      I am sorry for being so late in commenting for I arrived home so very late after a long day, but a joyful one, for when I left work, I was able to stop in the city in which my grands live and visit them, and especially my little one with the broken wind. She is healing so well!

      My eyes were so heavy, I just had to go on to bed and to that "wondrous land of beautiful sleep" as you so visually describe with your words. Love the imagery too, but your words always paint the picture in one's mind so clearly, and much more outstanding than any image can portray.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Have a lovely weekend.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you my Faithful one ... no need to sorry at any time Faith ..you will be by sooner or later I always know.. (even if I have to remind you , Ha,ha, ha ) it is great that you had a deep sleep ... we always seem to be on the same wave length.. Hmmm.... glad to hear about the grand daughter healing .. when they are young they heal faster ..:)) you go at such a frenetic pace I am not surprised it finally caught up with you ..

      Thank you Faith ..of the most beautiful smile .

      It has made my morn to find you here when I log on .. :))

      Be safe this weekend my drear..

      Love , hugs ..

      Michael

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      Wayne Barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Can I say, 'dreamy?' Nice one Michael.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thanks Wayne ..

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      Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

      Be careful, this kind of sleep you may not wake from, nor want to.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Nikki .. I love to dream it is so enlightening..!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      How lovely and what a blessing it is to sleep well.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Blossom .. yes but me I am always up late .. now 11:45 pm here !

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