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I love my wife
and yet another attempt at poetry...or maybe just some rambling from my heart
My heart is full
I love my wife
My heart is full
Married almost 28 years
Cannot explain my feelings
Have so much confidence and fears.
My wife is weary
Her work can be very heavy, everyday worries of family and life
She has many pains in her body
I want to fix everything. I want her to be happy
Doctors say there may be a problem
Could be issues of life and death
My mind explodes with thoughts
It races of words to say, it becomes hard to breathe
She looks for me to be strong
I know the doctor has got to be wrong.
My life is crumbling as we speak
God, please give me strength
My heart is weak
I call some, close to me
Help me; I am not as strong as I want to be.
I get on my knees and beg to God
I open my heart
Please give me strength
I begin to breathe
Doctor of specialty comes in to speak
They say it is not as a bad as others may think
God rests His hands upon our shoulders
The Doctor says, we think what appears to be bad
Is not so and we have our ways
To make things better, she will be fine
Tears overcome me
My wife gives me a smile
My heart is full, once again
God is so good!
And I love my wife.
Comments
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Nice to meet you CrisSp, and thank you so very much for your very kind remarks.
Goosebumps while reading all through out...your wife and your family are very lucky to have you. You seem to be very loving husband (and family man). Your words in here say so, all so well.
May love continue to spark in your heart and wish you and your wife happiness always.
Up, beautiful and another piece to share with.
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I am INDEED, very blessed.
Thank you SanneL for your visit and kind words.
Chris
What a loving and beautiful tribute to your wife. Such a lovely poem with words of compassion and love. You are so blessed to have each other, and share such strong bond.
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Thank you very much billybuc....
:)
I love poems about love and yours is beautiful...as is the love for your wife. Those feelings of hopelessness sweep over us and it is inconceivable that we can do nothing...at which time we simply turn it over to God and let Him do what we cannot.
I applaud your lovely marriage and wish you blessings and many more years to come with that lovely wife of yours.
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savvydating,
I am flattered and I thank you ever so much for your kind words.
Chris
A beautiful tribute to your wife. I keep telling women... there are still good men out there, and you are living proof. Congratulations on the positive diagnosis of your spouse!
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Thank you Maralexa, your comments are deeply appreciated.
May God continue to grant to you and your wife and family, many, many more blessings.
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Thanks Becky....My wife is everything in the world to me.
Beautiful and poignant. I will add some prayers for you and yours. God is so great. I am so happy to see another good marriage.
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thank you for your comments nell...and your compliment.
:)
What a beautiful tribute to your wife! Thank you for sharing :)
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feenix,
Thank you for your very gracious remarks....
CMerritt, beautiful and touching poem. I love that you love your wife as much as you do, and I also love that you love The Lord. You are truly and good man, a good husband and father, and a good servant to Our Father.
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One-life1, your prayers mean very much too my wife and I. I thank you for reading and caring.
Absolutely beautiful Hub. May God bless you and your family. Your wife will be in my prayers.
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C-Bless,
Thank you for reading my hub. I am very blessed...your comments mean very much to me, and I deeply appreciate them.
Made me teary-eye. Very charming ode to your bride. God is still Jehovah-Rapha, the Lord that heals, so please continue to keep the faith. I appreciate you sharing your heart so openly. Be blessed ...
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Thanks Ron, I truly am a lucky man... I appreciate your kind words.
A completely gorgeous poem, CMerrit, very moving. You and your wife are prosperous to have such love for each other. Thank you.
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Epi, I am completely humbled. Thank you ever so much for those very kind words, and I deeply appreciate your thoughts and energy.
......this life affirming and essential poetic tribute to your beloved wife is just about one of the most powerful and beautiful and moving pieces of writing - I've ever read - anywhere. Godspeed to you - as I send my good thoughts and energy to 'both' of you!
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Thanks Maggie, and I most certainly will keep you posted.
Thanks for caring.
:)
CMerritt, please keep me posted, and the best of wishes and hopes to receive good news!!
MM
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Maggie, I have never even tried to write such a "poem" if you will before. I merely have taken the advice from some from some fellow hubbers, and put down my thoughts, from my heart. I so much appreciate your prayers and very kind words.
My wife will have some extensive tests done tomorrow, that will, hopefully shine some good news upon us, and allow Doctors to bring some comfort and healing to my wife.
Your prayers mean very much too me.
:)
You and your family are in my thoughts and prayers, I wish your wife all the very best in these troublesome times. This is a very wonderful Hub CMerritt, I wish it wasn't so for you...it is very touching and you write beautifully from the inside out.. You can share with us, and hopefully gain strength and encouragement from us here, I for one am here and will be checking in hoping to hear good news... Thanks for sharing, you're in my prayers,
MM
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James, I cannot express myself enough of God's goodness to me. I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your very kind words, it means very much too me.
This poem is lovingly crafted and quite moving. God is good. He answered your prayer. You are blessed beyond measure. Thank you for sharing this priceless piece of art.
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FriendofTruth,
Thank you for your comments and for your prayers...
:)
Beautiful!
What a blessing your marriage is! And I'm so thankful that all is turning out well...will lift you both in prayer.
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Thank you b Malin, YES, My wife and I feel very blessed for the uplifting news we had earlier this week. I am, indeed, a very lucky man.
I so much appreciate your very kind remarks.
What a Beautiful, Heartfelt Tribute to your Wife and the Love you feel...She is a Lucky woman, and you my friend, are a very Lucky Man to have a Healthy Wife, once again.
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Christine.....Thanks......I never written anything beautiful before....I guess I gotta give my wife credit for it...and GOD. Cause, I'm not what I call a "beautiful" writer....I usually struggle with everything I write....this one I just laid it all out there with my thoughts at the time....
I really appreciate ALL of the kind words and encouragement by everyone....
So beautiful...
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I really am Sheri.....Thanks for reading.
Hope that it is possible to be long-married and STILL deeply in love.....THANKS!
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Sharyn, I appreciate you accolades.. :)
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Thank you Tamarajo
What beautiful, intimately written words about your lovely wife! Voted up and awesome.
Moved by your incredible love for your wife expressed so beatifully in your poem. Precious!
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PenMePretty, I have indeed experienced this, just this week. Thanks for reading my ramblings..
:)
This sounds like something you experienced. So much heart.
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marcoujor, I deeply appreciate you stopping by to read and leave such kind words to me.
Thanks,
:)
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Cogerson, I consider myself very blessed...and thanks for your comments.
CM~~ This is poignant and love- filled... thank you for sharing such a beautiful experience.
Voted UP & AWESOME & BEAUTIFUL...!
Very nice.....a man married to his best friend is indeed one lucky man....voted up
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Thank you Frog!...I truly am a very lucky man....I appreciate your kind remarks.
:)
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DDS, I really appreciate your very kind words. I love my wife with all my heart. She the best friend I ever had.
What a tribute to your wife. She's a lucky lady and you're obviously a lucky man.
Absolutely beautiful my friend.
The Frog
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Thanks Will and yes, this happened this week.
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Barbara, I appreciate you reading and commenting on my hub.
:)
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Michael, thank you very much for your kind words.
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Pop, I believe in happy endings too, and I appreciate your remarks.
:)
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Bluestar, thank you and I graciously accept you love and your comments.
:)
I think that was quite beautiful. Thank you for sharing that with all of us!
It is also nice to see that despite what we may be told that there are true and enduring loves.
It is something I feel I have and so nice to see it in others as well.
Great stuff Chris!
Was this about a real event?
Beautiful.
very beautiful and compassionately done,
I think a happy ending is near. All the best.
Beautifully written with honesty. Please remember only men cry. I am sending you some love and I hope you will find much more strength.
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Yes He is Sunnie....and I thank you for reading my hub and leaving your comments.
:)
Power and beautiful. God is good all the time!
Sunnie
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yes
and thanks Dusty.
:)
Chris, excellent writing that held me all the way to what sounds a happy resting place. If this is based on your life and that of your wife, a simple yes and I'll add you two, to my prayer list, dusty
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