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I shall wait for you upon the earth

Updated on February 17, 2013
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Tijani Achamlal is an English Teacher in Nador, Morocco.He studied English Literature in Mohamed 1 Univ .

No time shall weary me

No shadow of doubt shall make my soul grimy

No rain shall burn out

the blazing furnace of love

within my heart towards you

All storms shall

Strike and be passing

But as an armor against the wind’s bite

I shall be standing firm

As loyal

I shall wait for you

upon the earth.

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      Joanne M Olivieri 4 years ago

      Ah, that so touched my heart and I really love the style. So eloquently expressed. Just beautiful. Voted up.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Joanne M Olivieri,Thanks for stopping by and commented.

      Many blessings to you.

      James.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this stark perspective.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Mhatter99.You re welcome:)

      Have a nice week.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So much said in so few words. A gem for sure James my brawd.

      Keep them coming and thanks for allowing me to share in your talent. Have a wonderful day.

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Eiddwen.Thanks so much for your insight my chwaer.Yes,I will keep them coming.

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      Jai89 4 years ago from Cardiff

      Brilliantly written!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Jai89.Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.I appreciate that.

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      Jai89 4 years ago from Cardiff

      Your welcome.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I am glad you like it.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James WOW.. my friend I give you a standing ovation for this poem.. what an artist you are..

      many blessings

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Deborah Brooks,Thanks so much my dear friend for the standing ovation:) I ve learnt a lot from you recently.Thanks so much once again.

      Many Blessings to you too

      James

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Awesome poetry!! Loved it, even if it at first appeared on the dark side. Very romantic, actually! : )

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ dreamseeker2.Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.I appreciate that.

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Beautiful works, just beautiful. Love always finds a way to catch hold. its quite a feeling, and that poem of yours took the words right out of my mouth. fantastic work james. can't wait to see more.

      I. White

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Now that is a title to die for Sir James - Wolve and the words which follow really made me wish I wrote something as great as this - hubbravo to you my friend and sending warm wishes from lake erie time ontario canada 6:55pm

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      Fehl Dungo 4 years ago from close to you...

      Short but powerful. A beautiful reflection of strong and real love.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Isaac White.Thanks for the visit and the supporting words.I appreciate that.

      Have a nice day.

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      CrisSp 4 years ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      No jaded heart for an everlasting love...and love will certainly lead us back.

      Fantastic write!

      Thank you.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ CrisSp.Thanks for stopping by and commented.Yes surely love will find a way.We have to trust it ,no matter how long it takes!!

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      orange skys 4 years ago from Florida

      Short sweet and with meaning. I always look forward to seeing what new wonderful poem you have in store.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @orange skys.Thanks so much for the visit and sweet comments.I used to write long poems,but It seems no one likes that here lol so I changed my style to short turtle paces lol

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      Only a few people have gained this tye of love from me.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ PHILLYDREAMER, Love is amazing and there are some who deserve our love.We should wait them,one day will blob on our heads:)

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      James..where are you I havent seen or heard from my favorite poet?

      blessings

      Deb

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Sorry,I was sick and busy at work .Sorry for not hearing from me.Thanks for asking.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 4 years ago from Boston, MA

      Hi James, I love this poem, and I identify completely. Sad though but hopeful. I guess I see you have written quite a bit since I checked! Got to go out now but I'll make a note to come back when I get back. Good stuff thanks for sharing. You're awsome

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Blondey.Thanks for the check and you are amazing too.I am glad you liked it.Have a nice day! God bless!

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      HappyMikeWritter 4 years ago

      You use words incredibly. Is always nice and refreshing to see throught the poems the mind of the writer or should I say poet? Very enjoyable to read with a great picture. Thanks for sharing

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @HappyMikeWriter.Thanks so much for the visit and sharing.I am glad you like it.

      Many blessings to you.

      james

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      Michael Thacker 4 years ago from Fort Worth, Tx, USA

      Like the poem, very interesting. Short but to the point.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @MThacker.Thanks so much for the visit and comment.I am glad that you liked it.

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      Bernadyn 4 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

      Beautiful words with much meaning, well done :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ BNadyn.Thanks so much for the visit and comment.

      Have a nice day!

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      Josie Lee Yerk 4 years ago from Solo, Missouri

      I love this poem, it describes how I feel about my husband. I don't think he truly understands the depth of my feelings for him. I really enjoyed it and thanks for sharing it.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @Josie Yerk.Just be patient with your husband.One day he will understand those feelings that you have towards him .Thanks for the visit and comment.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Dear James... I am so glad you have highlighted this write of pure steadfastness and perseverance in standing firm for that one true, real love, until the end of days...I am speechless at this one's sheer beauty and determination as to not swaying come what may, you will be there.

      Wow! I believe this is my favorite one from you so far.

      Phenomenal imagery too. Up and more and sharing'

      Hugs from southern USA, Faith Reaper

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      Swati Chandiramani 3 years ago from India

      Awesome James !!!! Loved reading it or rather I should say ..feeling it till the end!! :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Love is a battlefield and the most beautiful people we have known are those who have known defeat,known suffering, known struggle, known loss, and have found their way out of the depths. These persons have an appreciation, a sensitivity, and an understanding of life that fills them with compassion, gentleness, and a deep loving concern. Beautiful people do not just happen.I dont claim that I am one of them,just I am trying to learn from my mistakes and stand still on the trench.I know the grey sky will be swept away when God permits the wind to blow and let sun rays strike us.I believe in love but sometimes people got me wrong and accused me of such things.I learn how to smile at them and let the wheel rolling on.

      Have a nice day there.Thanks for the beautiful comment.

      Hugs too from northern Morocco.

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      swati17,

      Thanks so much for the visit and comment.I appreciate that.

      Have a nice day there!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Well, now, dear James, your comment is almost a profound as your exquisite poem! Yes, precious heart, that is so true, for the heart knows what it knows and it may break and shatter to its depth and core, but it is resilient. Life is so very brutal, as we all know, and to come out on the other end is a beautiful thing to behold.

      Still waiting for that audio of your "beautiful" accent! : ) I added more that one, so it may help you figure out the accent to which I am referring.

      Have a lovely evening there in northern Morocco ... "beautiful" white crown.

      Hugs from southern USA, Faith Reaper

      9:31 p.m. here

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Faith,

      Life is full of ups and downs but in most cases,it is only what we choose to focus on.

      I tried to record a poem in youTube but I didn't like it. it was very noisy.Anyway,I will do it just for you.I will check out what you did there :)

      Hugs from northern Morocco to southern USA,

      Tijani

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Note: My audio poem will be called: In The Diaspora Unable to Sing,I Want To Come To Thee .

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Extremely sweet, and full of steadfastness. How I wish that my love for God would be as strong! Pray for me.

      Much peace.

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Resolute and excellent. Great stuff!!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      manatita44,

      Thanks so much for the comment.I am praying for you my friend.

      Have a nice day!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Sorry for being away.Thanks for stopping by and commented.

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      Brenda Thornlow 3 years ago from New York

      Beautiful! You perfectly capture the longing for someone. Voted up!

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      Bk42author,

      Thanks so much for stopping by.Have a beautiful weekend.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      wow, another amazing piece voted awesome

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      Linda Rogers 3 years ago from Minnesota

      So romantic and rich with metaphors. This is one beautifully written love letter James.

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Frank Atanacio ,

      Thanks so much for dropping by .

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      Tijani Achamlal 2 years ago from Morocco

      Minnetonka Twin ,

      Thanks so much for stopping by and commented.Have a nice weekend!

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