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I want to Offer Thee - Sublime Poetry

Updated on April 21, 2012

A good friend requested me to translate his poetry in English. A style I've developed for the sheer fun of it. I decided to merge the Filipino and English poems together so as to emphasize the thought of it.

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Gusto kitang Tulaan


gusto kitang tulaan,

I want to offer thee

the most sublime poetry


gaya ng bubuyog

just like the bees


sa piling ng bulaklak.

In the midst of the flowers

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gaya ng mga ibong gala

seems like the birds astray


sa malawak na karagatan.

In the vast ocean going to the bay


gaya ng unang sikat ng araw

just like the first hint of sunbeam


matapos ang ulan.

After the heavy rain

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gaya ng pag-angat ng liwanag

just like the ascending light


matapos ang dilim.

After the hazy darkness of night


gaya ng paru-paro

just like the butterflies


na nagliliwaliw sa bukirin,

that wanders in the meadow

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at nakikipaglaro

while amusing in a child’s play


sa mga dahong hinahawi ng hangin.

With the leaves flurried by the wind


gusto kitang tulaan –

I want to offer thee

My sublime poetry


sa piling ng mga tala,

in union with the stars


sa haplos ng mga gumamela,

with the caress of the Gumamela


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sa ngiti ng mga diwata,

in the midst of the smiles of the fairies


sa kalungkutan ng gabi,

and the night’s gloominess


o sa lamlam niyang kandila,

or the flicker of the candle


sa dalisdis niyang batis,

and the surging of the brook


sa tawag ng bukangliwayway

the call of the breaking dawn as well


o sa kinang niyang buwan.

Or the glistening moonbeam


gusto kitang tulaan.

I want to offer thee

My profound poetry…

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Jaypee Belarmino

Photograpoetist (noun) photographer, poet and artist, in one. And that is Jaypee Belarmino the writer of the Tagalog version of this poem and the man behind the amazing pictures I have used in this hub. There are so many things to write about this man but it would be an Antithesis so I will just lead you to the site that portrayed him which is written by my fellow writer and a photographer as well, Wallei Bautista Trinidad. Please free to click the link. Thank you.

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    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Demas!i'm glad you come along...have a great day!

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      Demas W Jasper 

      6 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      I thought "one good resurrectin deserves another" Passing along to my Tagalog=speaking daughter.

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello Audrey! so great to see you...thank you for visiting...

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      Audrey Howitt 

      6 years ago from California

      I loved having both languages in your presentation of this piece--just lovely!

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Caroline...thank you for the wonderful comment...take care!!!

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      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Raciniwa love the merging of two languages in the poem! Wonderful.

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello Beth! thank you for the beautiful comment too!!!those pictures are my friend's work of art...

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      Beth Perry 

      6 years ago from Tennesee

      It is a beautiful poem and beautiful photographs, too!

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you sisterrete Wallei and to your wonderful blog...

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Ruby...sorry for not replying too soon...my laptop need to be reformatted...thank you as always...

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Ruby...sorry for not replying too soon...my laptop need to be reformatted...thank you as always...

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      Wallei Bautista Trinidad 

      6 years ago

      You put another dimension, another brilliant rhythm to Kuya Jaypee's Tagalog version of the poem. Bravura!

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      girltalksshop 

      6 years ago

      Beautiful poem. I really liked it...: )

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful poem and pictures..Thank you..

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      Ruchira 

      6 years ago from United States

      beautiful poem and thanks for the translation. I also liked the pictures, Racin.

      Cheers!

    • raciniwa profile imageAUTHOR

      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      you could do that Vinaya, and i'll be glad to be your tutor...thank you for the time...have a great day...

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      The pleasure and honor is mine Sire Jaypee...and i am proud to be of service...

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you SubRon, yes, all the credit goes to Jaypee, and I am only the arranger here...i arrange the words into English...

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      yes he is Michael, a very gifted person...he captures his ideas into pictures and pictures into words...a very rare talent indeed...

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you billy for the appreciation, but this isn't my poem on translation...yet my first here on collaboration...

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      now you had me a reason to have a stroke...out of laughing...hahahaha...yeah, that maybe made me clever...lol again...i haven't expected to have a comment that blows me off...thank you Frank for the lovely comment...

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      Vinaya Ghimire 

      6 years ago from Nepal

      I have a wonderful Filipino friend. Maybe I could learn some words and surprise her.

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      Jaypee 

      6 years ago

      thank you sis Raci for your masterful translation!

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      James W. Nelson 

      6 years ago from eastern North Dakota

      Good job, Raciniwa, they might not be your words, but you put the hub together.

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raciniwa, this is a very nice poem. I really like it.

      this man has a gift for words. Although they are Filipino words they are nicely put together.

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Lovely poem and a unique way to present it. Thank you for a new experience!

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      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      a clever idea while translating this poem.. but to be honest I didn't read your introduction.. I jumped right into the poem and as I was reading I thought I was having a stroke.. then I said maybe Raci is having the stroke while writing this.. then back to me having the stroke.. because I realized if she were having the stroke. she wouldn't have been able to publish it.. I came a pinky close to dailing 911 until I read your intro..phew that took a lot explaining.. now here comes the stroke.......

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