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I want to Write something Beautiful

Updated on July 28, 2012


I want to write something beautiful

I want to write something fine

I want to write something lovely

Something that I can call mine


I want to caress your emotions

I want to touch your heart

I want to influence your feelings

Like a lovely work of art


I want my words to flow smoothly

I want them to go down with ease

I want my words to be fluid

To show my desire to please


I want you to read what’s important

I want you to see what is true

I want you to understand pure love

It’s why I do what I do


I know my prose is not perfect

My poetry falls short of my goal

I know that my writing needs practice

But I still hope it touches your soul



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      April Reynolds 4 years ago from Arizona

      Thank you SiberianWolf, that is very encouraging!

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      whenever poetry comes from the heart, it always touches my soul

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      April Reynolds 4 years ago from Arizona

      Thank you Newengland, this made my day!

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      newenglandsun 4 years ago

      "I want to caress your emotions

      I want to touch your heart

      I want to influence your feelings

      Like a lovely work of art

      I want my words to flow smoothly

      I want them to go down with ease

      I want my words to be fluid

      To show my desire to please"

      They do.

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      shankar sen 5 years ago

      Is someone that everyone needs

      A friend

      Is that special one

      A friend read more »

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      shankar sen 5 years ago

      Friend gives you smile

      But true friend gives you happiness

      Friend will lie about you read more »

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      shankar sen 5 years ago

      I could skip a heartbeat, and I would survive,

      I could be in a car crash, and still be alive.

      The clouds could fall out of the sky,

      The oceans could disappear, and all turn ..........

      Source: Best Friend Poems - Poems about Best Friends http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/friend/best-frien...

      www.FamilyFriendPoems.com

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      I am glad to hear that pringoooals. I hope you are right.

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      Karina 5 years ago from Edinburgh

      I believe it touched many souls and definitely mine

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      Thank you Maria, you hav e made my day :)

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      this morning I am going to sing, sing praises to my Lord God who's king

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      Maria Cecilia 5 years ago from Philippines

      you're good....obviously coming from the heart, and the content is a package of what you really want in your writing...

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      The bird is singing,the mobile is ringing and I am writting,wht are you doing?.........

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      The Sun is shining and the bird is singing ,good morning

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      Ayeray Aye t-a nay-avora d-a bulbulythay dhan kay-achay khajna d-bow kishay......

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      Chanda hay tue,mayre surowj hay tu,o mary bahoka kajol hay tue

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      Thank you, thank you shankar sen, you sing a sweet song

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      Sing,sing,sing, sing mother sing , can mother sing, mother can sing

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      Shankar sen 5 years ago

      What a beautyful nature you giftted us.....tree, bird, river ,lake, etc are around us........we love your creation .........it refresh our mind............. we love our god............

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      That is certainly high praise Conservative Lady! Thank you for taking the time to read it and I'm glad it kept your attention.

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      Sheila 5 years ago from Surprise Arizona - formerly resided in Washington State

      I too beleive you have succeeded and very well. I usually don't read a poem through it's entirety as I loose interest but I did not want to stop reading your prose. ;-)

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      Thank you your kind words snakeslane. I'm so glad you liked my poem!

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      Verlie Burroughs 5 years ago from Canada

      April, you are doing just fine in the poetry department. What a light and lyrical verse. It's warmed my heart, and it is so telling about what motivates us writers. You've got my vote. Regards, snakeslane

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      April Reynolds 5 years ago from Arizona

      Thankyou lindalou! I appreciate your vote of confidence. There are so many excellent writers here on hubpages, I'm glad you liked my poem. Thank you for taking the time to read it!

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      Linda 5 years ago from Texas

      I do believe you succeeded! You wrote something beautiful! Good job.