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I will tell you one last time

Updated on March 18, 2013

Your words can't conceal

How you feel for me

Speaking just of freindship

Englufed in jealously

Have I read this all wrong

Do you feel less

Or should I once again speak out

Once again confess

We'll talk about a future

Where we could both run free

But instead listening to others words

Always stopping you and me

I think you yearn for true love

But do not know the taste

Perhaps mines just one more soul

Your fear will lay to watse

But if your love is real

And you don't know what to do

I will tell you one last time


I'm in love with you


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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Thanks Shauna , thinking romantic and being romantic are separate things with me lol ;)

      Jon xxx

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      You are such a romantic soul, Jon. You wear your heart on your sleeve. How could anyone not love you!

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago

      Beautiful and heartwarming writing. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. A romantically, delightful poem.

      P.S. change Your fear will lay to watse to waste

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      June 5 years ago from From the Heart of God

      Sincere words from an in love person. This is very sweet Simba!

      Thank you for this thought.

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      GEOFFREY RIOBA 5 years ago from KISUMU - KENYA

      that love poem is sweet it reminds me of my.............!

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      John Kinney 5 years ago

      Very cool. Awesome poem!

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      Anna Haven 5 years ago from Scotland

      The only way to be, then you will never run out :)

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Anna I'm a glass half full kinda guy :)

      Simba X

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      Anna Haven 5 years ago from Scotland

      A great narrative story running through your poem, I loved how we were watching over a love story, against the odds. Hope it has a happy ending :)

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      thost thank you for the compliment my freind and for reading my work, from a writer like you this really means a lot to me .


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      thost 5 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      You have feeling and it shows. I will vote this Hub up.

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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Good afternoon Colin !! well evening here now TBH ,

      LOL your comments always make me laugh , make me blush, and make me smile as soon as I see your name on my hubs, mate get loads of lemon in that tea !!! maybe a shot of whisky with no (e) Irish is best !!! although that comment might start a war on the scotch front !! lol

      Anyway going off the track as usual lol , as for your cats I won't say on here and ruin the image of myself you are so generously portraying ;)

      Winter here too keeps creeping back !! we had an awesome frost thismorning but really Colin I have had enough of the cold !! bring the sunshine , as soon as it's here I'll send it over to ya !!

      Sending good vibes and peace to you from across the pond


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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      Eddy thanks so much for your kind comments agian I really enjoy it when you read my work

      Simba XX

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      Good afternoon Jon from lake erie time ontario canada 2:48pm.

      How is the most beautiful man at Hubpages who just happens to write the most beautiful and romantic words as well. You are like some kind of Love God, lol.

      All is well here my friend although I am nursing a bit of a head cold and it always goes to my ears.

      My cats are both fine and when I go to bed at night or in the morning after work I am hemmed in my bed by wall to wall pussy (cats) lol.

      I am sending you my very best wishes with a nice cuppa tea before I go out for a walk. A bit of a snow storm here today as winter is still hanging on.

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A beautiful poem;I vote up and share.


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      Simba73 5 years ago from UK

      tobusiness ,

      Thank you so much I love playing around with the emotions of love we are too afraid to admit, I think it helps people realise they are normal to have these fears and nerves. :)

      Simba XX

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Simba, this is so sweet, we should all know the taste of true love. Beautiful words.