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I will tell you one last time
Your words can't conceal
How you feel for me
Speaking just of freindship
Englufed in jealously
Have I read this all wrong
Do you feel less
Or should I once again speak out
Once again confess
We'll talk about a future
Where we could both run free
But instead listening to others words
Always stopping you and me
I think you yearn for true love
But do not know the taste
Perhaps mines just one more soul
Your fear will lay to watse
But if your love is real
And you don't know what to do
I will tell you one last time
Yes
I'm in love with you
Comments
- Author
Thanks Shauna , thinking romantic and being romantic are separate things with me lol ;)
Jon xxx
You are such a romantic soul, Jon. You wear your heart on your sleeve. How could anyone not love you!
Beautiful and heartwarming writing. :)
Voted up and beautiful. A romantically, delightful poem.
P.S. change Your fear will lay to watse to waste
Sincere words from an in love person. This is very sweet Simba!
Thank you for this thought.
that love poem is sweet it reminds me of my.............!
Very cool. Awesome poem!
The only way to be, then you will never run out :)
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Anna I'm a glass half full kinda guy :)
Simba X
A great narrative story running through your poem, I loved how we were watching over a love story, against the odds. Hope it has a happy ending :)
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thost thank you for the compliment my freind and for reading my work, from a writer like you this really means a lot to me .
Jon
You have feeling and it shows. I will vote this Hub up.
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Good afternoon Colin !! well evening here now TBH ,
LOL your comments always make me laugh , make me blush, and make me smile as soon as I see your name on my hubs, mate get loads of lemon in that tea !!! maybe a shot of whisky with no (e) Irish is best !!! although that comment might start a war on the scotch front !! lol
Anyway going off the track as usual lol , as for your cats I won't say on here and ruin the image of myself you are so generously portraying ;)
Winter here too keeps creeping back !! we had an awesome frost thismorning but really Colin I have had enough of the cold !! bring the sunshine , as soon as it's here I'll send it over to ya !!
Sending good vibes and peace to you from across the pond
Jon
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Eddy thanks so much for your kind comments agian I really enjoy it when you read my work
Simba XX
Good afternoon Jon from lake erie time ontario canada 2:48pm.
How is the most beautiful man at Hubpages who just happens to write the most beautiful and romantic words as well. You are like some kind of Love God, lol.
All is well here my friend although I am nursing a bit of a head cold and it always goes to my ears.
My cats are both fine and when I go to bed at night or in the morning after work I am hemmed in my bed by wall to wall pussy (cats) lol.
I am sending you my very best wishes with a nice cuppa tea before I go out for a walk. A bit of a snow storm here today as winter is still hanging on.
A beautiful poem;I vote up and share.
Eddy.
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tobusiness ,
Thank you so much I love playing around with the emotions of love we are too afraid to admit, I think it helps people realise they are normal to have these fears and nerves. :)
Simba XX
Simba, this is so sweet, we should all know the taste of true love. Beautiful words.
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